Comments by AshtrayDirt
- "i read your other recent submissions and if you want total honesty which i hope you will accept constructively...i didn't think they were nearly as good as some of the other stuff i've read of yours. but this, this is better. -Dirt."
Posted by AshtrayDirt on "words & passwords" by theBAC
- "either it was your words or the structure or the moment, er whatever it was point being is that i got some crazy visuals while reading this. good write...it's all about what it invokes in someone. -Dirt"
Posted by AshtrayDirt on "Touch Brought Back Taste" by XCryingMinotaurX
- "your poem reassured me that i'm not seeing things and another beings eyes give the same messages to its brain about this sort of bullshit. good write. -Dirt."
Posted by AshtrayDirt on "c*nts without a clue" by theBAC
- "O. I like this one better than the last one i read of yours. This one starts out with a ballsy visual and holds up its promise to the reader. the length is perfect.Good Write. -Dirt"
Posted by AshtrayDirt on "dio? who dis? dis ain't dr. dre?" by theBAC
- "i like the way you wrote this, it's not disjointed but its not your average poetic format either. The concept of the poem is good as well, i like it. -Dirt"
Posted by AshtrayDirt on "rorshach man" by theBAC
- "sounds all too familiar to me, except i'm not addicted to it. the male character is what i am speaking of. nice piece."
Posted by AshtrayDirt on "Addiction" by Demosthenes
- "i like the last stanza. the first stanza i think i could be broken up a bit...the wordiness of it makes it loose it impact."
Posted by AshtrayDirt on "Envy" by Qwendragoness
- "wow. i hate that kelly osbourn has anything to do with my work. i'm gonna change the title"
Posted by AshtrayDirt on "Fuck." by AshtrayDirt
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