return (tacenda)
By KittyStryker
oh baby
come and dance the tarantella
i won't tell a soul
if you won't
bruise me, use me
don't care if you abuse me
just want you to be mine
even for
a little time
feel your way up
one smooth leg to my haven of betrayal
damaged goods
but some things are better
when they've been handled
or at least
that's what i keep saying
and praying
and trying to believe
gag me with my own innocence
since i don't have the sense
to keep my mouth shut
and you
you always loved
putting something inside it
inside me
as long as you're touching me
i can imagine it's love
it's almost enough
almost
affection
affliction
addiction
maybe all this
won't hurt so badly
the next morning
if i can rearrange the frames
and make this picture perfect
we always looked so happy
in our photographs
black and blue
almost invisible in these
black and whites
maybe it has to do with
the way you tend to bruise me
deep under the skin
and only scar my heart
it's an art
the way you keep me
barely
breathing
Comments on "return (tacenda)"
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On Sunday, July 13, 2008, heroineyes
(111) wrote:
i like the imagery of the photograph part...very good visual...
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On Monday, March 5, 2007, lajeeves
(46) wrote:
i voted for this poem in the angsty contest it brings me to where you were at the time it was written
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On Thursday, February 12, 2004, Jonas
(715) wrote:
zenith. you're on a hot streak... these (and this) poem(s): amazing.
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A former member wrote:
The ending brought it all together so perfectly. I'm officially in awe hun. -Doll
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On Friday, February 6, 2004, purr_verse
(1052) wrote:
this is beautifully written, subtle and powerful, wonderfully crafted. and from the "black and blue" stanza onwards is simply outstanding. purr
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On Thursday, February 5, 2004, Angst Queen
(370) wrote:
this is a powerful write. i'm impressed