Taste of You(in my veins)

By SGT Bloth

I tasted you once
You fell to your knees
Cold and lifeless
Now you are forever with me

I can feel you here
in my veins
screamming for more
calling out too me

"I love you" you said
"I need you" you cried...
"Take me!" you demanded..
"Finish it." you begged in a weak whimper

So i did
and no more you suffer
my little doll
You feel pain no longer

I feel you hear
I hear your screams
I long for peace
You are in my dreams

I smell your hair
Your sweet perfume
always haunting me
From your shallow tomb

I feel you here
in my veins
running through me
my heart exclaims

I feel you Dear
in my soul
you are part of me
you made me whole

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Published on Tuesday, October 28, 2003. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "Taste of You(in my veins)"

On Sunday, November 23, 2003, Anybody_Killette (47) wrote:

wow... i love..
On Sunday, November 9, 2003, Jadednoir (28) wrote:

are you a hopeless romantic or a romantic without hope? This is piece allres me, and the ending is piercing.. whoa..it is shaped like a dagger... very nice
On Sunday, November 9, 2003, Drea (1388) wrote:

sad but romatic...beautiful ~Drea~
On Thursday, October 30, 2003, Crystal Passion (221) wrote:

hmm very interesting piece. very nice to say the least XxkRYzxX
On Sunday, November 2, 2003, SGT Bloth (162) wrote:

Thank you again Crys...It is soo nice hearing from you again. Keep in touch....Bloth
On Thursday, October 30, 2003, Ophelia (221) wrote:

Very nice, it makes me sad though, , , O.
On Sunday, November 2, 2003, SGT Bloth (162) wrote:

Dont be sad Ophelia, It can't rain all the time:*
On Wednesday, October 29, 2003, Rebel_Angel (321) wrote:

wow! I really like this! I love the ending.
On Thursday, October 30, 2003, SGT Bloth (162) wrote:

Thank you sweetheart!!! i was wondering if anyone would ever see this work...Its my favorite so far..... i just noticed its shapped like a dagger isnt that wierd???it wasnt even on purpose. LOL