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Future Woman
By Stranger
She will wear her bones on the outside
Like albino armor
To protect her from the obsidian tips
Of the words
That fly like arrows
Without warning
Out of the mouth of man
Her skin and breasts
Will secrete slippery oil
To protect her from the cling
Of a man's love
Her holes will have grown
Glistening white teeth
To protect her from
The appetites of man
Her heart will have crawled
Into her skull
To live within
The folds of her brain
To protect her
From herself
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Copyright 2003 Stranger
Published on Thursday, August 28, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Future Woman"
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On Wednesday, May 13, 2020, tonebone
(48)
wrote:
the very next step in the evolution of man
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On Thursday, August 26, 2004, capt_funguy
(777) wrote:
jesus christmas ! ... this is gripping imaginating ... pelt me with things i couldn't think of ... blindingly refreshing ... glad i stumbled across your path ... too slick ... funguy
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On Thursday, March 4, 2004, Mistress Morbid
(405) wrote:
Absolutely brilliant, but also scary.
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On Monday, March 1, 2004, OLd SouL
(717) wrote:
interesting conceptual art/idea. What happens mentally can be described/imaged physically. What I got out of this was more or less 'You are what you eat' situation... I'm usually way off base but thats what makes poetry inticing to me. :::OLd
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On Friday, November 21, 2003, blackdarkness
(227) wrote:
it takes a lot of thought to come up with something like this....i like it
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On Sunday, October 5, 2003, SnowQueen
(59) wrote:
Tres bien.. I'd hate to live that way.
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On Wednesday, September 10, 2003, Raze Drake
(85) wrote:
*sits there, thinking, "Good write"*
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On Thursday, September 4, 2003, maddin foxxxy
(358) wrote:
I had not read this carefully enough, but now that I did I am truly fascinated by each and every word...I am at loss of words...my entire admiration is on this one.
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On Tuesday, September 2, 2003, Blinded_Tiger
(518) wrote:
*chills* When I get chills Stranger, its becouse you hit something I feel deeply. I know what you see, and this way you get it across is just incredible. It is not easy, and you show great skill here. Tiger
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On Tuesday, September 2, 2003, Crystal Passion
(221) wrote:
WOW is not a powerfule enough word hmmm I shall use Dave's UBER because damn this was an excellent write! -Kryz
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On Monday, September 1, 2003, KittyStryker
(710) wrote:
oh... if only i could build those things now! and then i think i wouldn't wish them on anyone... but sometimes... it's easier to withdraw... ::sigh:; beautiful.
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On Friday, August 29, 2003, Aurora_Light
(472) wrote:
holy shit u are so great at writeing i wish but one of my writes was half as good as this one but alas i will never have ur talent
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On Sunday, August 31, 2003, IceDragoness
(193) wrote:
Wow.. very cool, i agree completely with aurora this is dead awesome ~Dawn
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On Friday, August 29, 2003, Six-Out
(1423) wrote:
Wow man...this is talent in full swing. Stranger, I love this piece. Look down at what urban said, and that is all I want to say, but he said it first, so I won't. :)
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On Thursday, August 28, 2003, Ophelia
(221) wrote:
I love the last stanza if only my heart would hide from the rest of me life would be so much easier............O
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On Thursday, August 28, 2003, _Andrew_
(245) wrote:
nicely written *~*aNDReW*~*
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On Thursday, August 28, 2003, urbanhumility
(1158) wrote:
intellectual imagery,like performanc art,i can see this......the subject matter is brilliant.....a possible evoloution given to social standards, a strong piece.......urban
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