To Dust We Settle
By cre
Dust has fallen,
Like a blanket pulled to rest
Upon a face in death.
A silent settling
That says to all, move on;
The life that was here has gone.
Even the light
Of a fiery sun,
Hides and shies away
At the motes of something more
Than simply time decayed.
A stilled-breath scene, a whispered tale.
A "Once upon another life",
A beauty death has paled.
And like a curtain,
Bequeathing to a watcher's heart
The actor's final bow;
What has been is living now,
In no more than memory.
Something lost;
A thing that was,
And again shall never be.
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Copyright 2003 cre
Published on Saturday, July 19, 2003.
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A former member wrote:
Brilliant!
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On Sunday, May 6, 2012, Dominic
(53) wrote:
Brilliant. Humbling.
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A former member wrote:
My favorite line is "That says to all, move on; the life that was here is now gone", this piece is absolutely brilliant
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A former member wrote:
and who is the king or darkness? you are... indeed.
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On Monday, April 5, 2004, BoldSolitude
(214) wrote:
The first stanza was captivating and thought provoking. I've never read dust described so perfectly. Makes me think of a dusty ghost town that's had all of the life sucked out of it.
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On Monday, April 5, 2004, BoldSolitude
(214) wrote:
I read it over again and the images keep coming to mind, my first comment was not even close to giving this justice.
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A former member wrote:
Really great poem. I just jumped forward about 5 months in your writing and I can see a huge difference. I love the second stanza, the whole poem has a very forboding tone, I love it!
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On Thursday, July 24, 2003, KittyStryker
(710) wrote:
amazing. pieces of a past, gone like ashes on the wind.
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On Thursday, July 24, 2003, CharlottesWeb
(509) wrote:
thick emotion. You've again...created a breathing, living feeling with mere words. ~DW~
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On Thursday, July 24, 2003, cre
(410) wrote:
it's amazing . . . you get me so well. when no one else does . . . even when I'm only half sure what I meant . . . you always get it. way cool :)
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On Thursday, July 24, 2003, CharlottesWeb
(509) wrote:
You are breath taking... this touched me so deep and smoothly. I read it first, and perceived a death the second time I took an old memory away from the meaning...the third the death of an old memory. Each different thread holds the heart on a platter of
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On Wednesday, July 23, 2003, Midnight Phoenix
(240) wrote:
Memories are all we have. It's interesting to think that today may be an old fairy tale some day. Interesting write!
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On Monday, July 21, 2003, Blood of Winter
(296) wrote:
You are quite the amazing poet.
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On Monday, July 21, 2003, Armand
(54) wrote:
Sweet Jane... this is so much more eloquent and relevent than any psalm one might recite at a graveside. if i were a clergy, i would surely use this in my travels. wonderfully done.
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A former member wrote:
wow.This is really really really truly just...amazing,i absolutly love it,such a beautiful piece
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On Sunday, July 20, 2003, Demosthenes
(155) wrote:
goddang you cre, with your wonderful wonderful writing and super awesome talent. -B
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On Sunday, July 20, 2003, Six-Out
(1423) wrote:
What can you possibly say to such perfect beauty?
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On Saturday, July 19, 2003, Aurora_Light
(472) wrote:
great write i like it
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On Saturday, July 19, 2003, Ophelia
(221) wrote:
I really loved this so simple and honest, also beautiful, nice work.....O.
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A former member wrote:
I likes