To Dust We Settle

By cre

Dust has fallen,
Like a blanket pulled to rest
Upon a face in death.
A silent settling
That says to all, move on;
The life that was here has gone.
Even the light
Of a fiery sun,
Hides and shies away
At the motes of something more
Than simply time decayed.

A stilled-breath scene, a whispered tale.
A "Once upon another life",
A beauty death has paled.

And like a curtain,
Bequeathing to a watcher's heart
The actor's final bow;
What has been is living now,
In no more than memory.
Something lost;
A thing that was,
And again shall never be.

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Copyright 2003 cre
Published on Saturday, July 19, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Brilliant!

  • Dominic On Sunday, May 6, 2012, Dominic (53)By person wrote:

    Brilliant. Humbling.

  • A former member wrote: My favorite line is "That says to all, move on; the life that was here is now gone", this piece is absolutely brilliant

  • A former member wrote: and who is the king or darkness? you are... indeed.

  • BoldSolitude On Monday, April 5, 2004, BoldSolitude (214)By person wrote:

    The first stanza was captivating and thought provoking. I've never read dust described so perfectly. Makes me think of a dusty ghost town that's had all of the life sucked out of it.

  • BoldSolitude On Monday, April 5, 2004, BoldSolitude (214)By person wrote:

    I read it over again and the images keep coming to mind, my first comment was not even close to giving this justice.

  • A former member wrote: Really great poem. I just jumped forward about 5 months in your writing and I can see a huge difference. I love the second stanza, the whole poem has a very forboding tone, I love it!

  • KittyStryker On Thursday, July 24, 2003, KittyStryker (710)By person wrote:

    amazing. pieces of a past, gone like ashes on the wind.

  • CharlottesWeb On Thursday, July 24, 2003, CharlottesWeb (509)By person wrote:

    thick emotion. You've again...created a breathing, living feeling with mere words. ~DW~

  • cre On Thursday, July 24, 2003, cre (410)By person wrote:

    it's amazing . . . you get me so well. when no one else does . . . even when I'm only half sure what I meant . . . you always get it. way cool :)

  • CharlottesWeb On Thursday, July 24, 2003, CharlottesWeb (509)By person wrote:

    You are breath taking... this touched me so deep and smoothly. I read it first, and perceived a death the second time I took an old memory away from the meaning...the third the death of an old memory. Each different thread holds the heart on a platter of

  • Midnight Phoenix On Wednesday, July 23, 2003, Midnight Phoenix (240)By person wrote:

    Memories are all we have. It's interesting to think that today may be an old fairy tale some day. Interesting write!

  • Blood of Winter On Monday, July 21, 2003, Blood of Winter (296)By person wrote:

    You are quite the amazing poet.

  • Armand On Monday, July 21, 2003, Armand (54)By person wrote:

    Sweet Jane... this is so much more eloquent and relevent than any psalm one might recite at a graveside. if i were a clergy, i would surely use this in my travels. wonderfully done.

  • A former member wrote: wow.This is really really really truly just...amazing,i absolutly love it,such a beautiful piece

  • Demosthenes On Sunday, July 20, 2003, Demosthenes (155)By person wrote:

    goddang you cre, with your wonderful wonderful writing and super awesome talent. -B

  • Six-Out On Sunday, July 20, 2003, Six-Out (1423)By person wrote:

    What can you possibly say to such perfect beauty?

  • Aurora_Light On Saturday, July 19, 2003, Aurora_Light (472)By person wrote:

    great write i like it

  • Ophelia On Saturday, July 19, 2003, Ophelia (221)By person wrote:

    I really loved this so simple and honest, also beautiful, nice work.....O.

  • A former member wrote: I likes


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