the gagged hum of love
By Taunting The Reaper
the defendant wrapped her body in a blanket
to transport her
after she was gagged and brutally beaten
to death
with a baseball bat that thunderously
pounded the desperate, pleading look
off of a face he'd often kissed
until her identity was almost lost
the defendant then proceeded to steal
his father-in-law's boat
so he could dump her body in a lake
as the final part of his murderous plan
a week after her body was found floating
the defendant stood in court and plead guilty
to the murder of a woman
he once called his girlfriend
but verdicts
no matter how just
can never bring you back
right?
the victim's mother once told a reporter
she still sees her
on clear nights in the lake
slowing aching for the moonlight
reaching for it so vividly
that the water ripples
in a playful ballroom quickstep
as if to charm her back to life
I can't say for certain if the mother's vision
wasn't just a grief stricken mind splintered by loss
but I can tell you the defendant
was sentenced to death
and on the night following his execution
there were reports of a soft, shapely silhouette
caught by the moonlight
of a nearby window
leaning over his corpse
seemingly singing him to sleep
with some kind of muffled lullaby
the gagged hum of love
Author's Note:
This work is loosely based on a true story I saw on the news.Comments on "the gagged hum of love"
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A former member wrote:
how sadly the girls ghost can not rest
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A former member wrote:
You know my sister lol
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A former member wrote:
Oh I can definately see the horror scenario in my mind. The sound of a baseball bat to carpet, i know it well!.
The ripple's in the water and the ghostly memory thereafter. Great work on this one.
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On Thursday, January 19, 2012, FadedBlues
(2096) wrote:
...this is the kind of poem that the author wishes was fiction...but it happened, you documented it, that's what writers do...
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On Thursday, January 19, 2012, dwells
(4177) wrote:
Well said, thanks.
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On Thursday, January 19, 2012, Devilish
(2633) wrote:
I hate these kinds of stories.. I see them every day....
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On Thursday, January 19, 2012, dwells
(4177) wrote:
Thought this was just another hum job until I finished reading it. Very creepy and reminded me of Casino for some reason, thanks!
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On Thursday, January 19, 2012, FadedBlues
(2096) wrote:
...you're thinking of the baseball bat fatal beating near the end of the movie...