the gagged hum of love

By Taunting The Reaper

the defendant wrapped her body in a blanket

to transport her

after she was gagged and brutally beaten

to death

with a baseball bat that thunderously

pounded the desperate, pleading look

off of a face he'd often kissed

until her identity was almost lost

 

the defendant then proceeded to steal

his father-in-law's boat

so he could dump her body in a lake

as the final part of his murderous plan

 

a week after her body was found floating

the defendant stood in court and plead guilty

to the murder of a woman

he once called his girlfriend

but verdicts

no matter how just

can never bring you back

right?

 

the victim's mother once told a reporter

she still sees her

on clear nights in the lake

slowing aching for the moonlight

reaching for it so vividly

that the water ripples

in a playful ballroom quickstep

as if to charm her back to life

 

I can't say for certain if the mother's vision

wasn't just a grief stricken mind splintered by loss

but I can tell you the defendant

was sentenced to death

and on the night following his execution

there were reports of a soft, shapely silhouette

caught by the moonlight

of a nearby window

leaning over his corpse

seemingly singing him to sleep

with some kind of muffled lullaby

the gagged hum of love

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Copyright 2012 A Better Way To Die
Published on Thursday, January 19, 2012.     Filed under: "Abuse" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

This work is loosely based on a true story I saw on the news.
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  • A former member wrote: how sadly the girls ghost can not rest

  • A former member wrote: You know my sister lol

  • A former member wrote: Oh I can definately see the horror scenario in my mind. The sound of a baseball bat to carpet, i know it well!. The ripple's in the water and the ghostly memory thereafter. Great work on this one.

  • FadedBlues On Thursday, January 19, 2012, FadedBlues (2096)By person wrote:

    ...this is the kind of poem that the author wishes was fiction...but it happened, you documented it, that's what writers do...

  • dwells On Thursday, January 19, 2012, dwells (4177)By person wrote:

    Well said, thanks.

  • Devilish On Thursday, January 19, 2012, Devilish (2633)By person wrote:

    I hate these kinds of stories.. I see them every day.... Scholar

  • dwells On Thursday, January 19, 2012, dwells (4177)By person wrote:

    Thought this was just another hum job until I finished reading it. Very creepy and reminded me of Casino for some reason, thanks!

  • FadedBlues On Thursday, January 19, 2012, FadedBlues (2096)By person wrote:

    ...you're thinking of the baseball bat fatal beating near the end of the movie...


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