Thoughts from Mary
By RubyXero
Permanence.
printing patiently waiting
we drone away
void in the rhythmic repetition.
of life.
.
.
.
.
.
.
Sometimes
that liquid love
can be hard to control.
Freed movement.
Step
into me
I yearn for that raw passion.
creeping in the shadows
still
suffers the screams.
... "SMILE! :) "
a gesture
that becomes
so hard to fake.
That simple presense
makes
me blank.
THe............... expectancy
of a blank page
and
a pen.
Let's open her up kids,
and see what we can find.
What's
inside.
......And she's on the run again
skittish and hiding.
Untrusting.
How long and many
are the effects
of our tragedies.
Fester.
We fester.
Sink
sink deeper now
so soothing. release.
And they scream
"Pull Out!
This is not what you want."
But then, how would they
know,
this is just me?
I never
let anyone in. ----
Comments on "Thoughts from Mary"
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A former member wrote:
V ery good...nice flow and poetic.
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On Tuesday, July 27, 2010, TropicalSnowstorm
(1580) wrote:
I love the flow of this piece - the ending is the perfect way to tie it all up. Ciao, T/S
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A former member wrote:
Lovely portrayal of aloneness. Your expression was enlightening and off your beaten path in flow. I loved it. =)
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A former member wrote:
Excellant write my friend. This is the first I have ran across your work. Glad I did. Write on. :)
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A former member wrote:
The emptiness I feel inside this piece almost creates an echo when I read your words aloud. Beautiful and raw, I love it.--Draven.