Promise Me This
By Gray Vision
Promise me,
That when we're through
That you'll think
of me
And I, of you.
Promise me,
That when times
are hard
And you can't carry on
You'll stay by my side,
No matter what,
The price.
Promise me,
When
you're feeling blue
And there's nothing,
You can do,
That
you'll think of me
Being happy as can be.
Promise
me,
When the sky is gray
In the month of May,
That you'll
call me
And at least say, "hey."
Promise me,
That
as time goes on
And age, takes its toll,
That your love for
me
Won't ever, grow bold.
Promise me,
That you'll
cherish these wishes
As I would yours,
From the time we met,
Till the time we're gone,
Promise me.
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Copyright 2010 Gray Vision
Author's Note:
Feel free to comment or pitch any advice, every bit helps no matter how insignificant one may think, ty.Comments on "Promise Me This"
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On Monday, March 19, 2012, Hands_Around_My_Throat
(67) wrote:
Being able to be there for the person you love most, when they aren't yours anymore is perhaps the hardest thing to do, because as much as they may need you, the ache never entirely goes away. Lovely.
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On Saturday, July 23, 2011, SweetEvilness93
(9) wrote:
I love this poem.I find it kind of sad but really good.Great job. :)
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On Wednesday, July 27, 2011, Gray Vision
(424) wrote:
Thank you very much, as good as it is I know there's still room for improvement so thank you for the comment it's much appreciated. Thanks for dropping by and take care =)
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On Tuesday, May 18, 2010, Dilated View
(582) wrote:
An honest and heartfelt piece here. I wish all relationships could make this promise, intimate or friendly or otherwise. Hope this plays out how you wish, nicely written.
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On Tuesday, January 11, 2011, Gray Vision
(424) wrote:
I know, but it not always this way. It sucks to lose someone despite the reasons after you've both been through so much together. In this peice though I tried to portray a love between two individuals even though they aren't together and I thought it turned out well. This kind of love is truely rare, thank you for commenting =)