Productivity

By Gray Vision

Moody
Clumsy
Dirty
Grouchy
Profanity
All sounds like Catastrophe,
Vanity
Jeopardy
Poverty
Insecurity
Deputy
Duty
It's all coming,
Back to me.
As for Security
Philosophy
Calamity and finality
All these words
Can be expressed
Through Poetry!

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Copyright 2010 Gray Vision
Published on Wednesday, April 7, 2010.     Filed under: "Beat" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

This was something new that I experimented with, it was fun to say the least, enjoy!
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  • carlosjackal On Wednesday, November 15, 2017, carlosjackal (3011)By person wrote:

    Digging this wonderful cascade of brevity. A little gem.

  • knightmirror On Saturday, August 31, 2013, knightmirror (426)By person wrote:

    i like the flow and the message...thanks for taking the time to create that and share it with all those who choose to read it...-knight

  • A former member wrote: Its different, but in a good way. Its short and to the point. I get exactly what you're talking about. Great piece(:

  • Devilish On Tuesday, August 16, 2011, Devilish (2662)By person wrote:

    Wow I have to say you have a way of expression that catches... Lovely! Scholar

  • Gray Vision On Tuesday, August 16, 2011, Gray Vision (425)By person wrote:

    That's what we as poets do we take the mundane and make it into something a little bigger for others to see, and everyone on this site does this in there own individual way, including you =)

  • A Life Without You On Wednesday, June 30, 2010, A Life Without You (146)By person wrote:

    excellent, i myself write about 90% beat, love it! in hopes of reading more...

  • A former member wrote: I really like the flow of this one, I was flipping through pages in a book in my head while reading the words. Excellent.

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