This is My Profile Picture

By RubyXero

.......
A blast of you
Personality at first impression.
The jekyll and hyde.
This is how we define ourselves.
Or how we wish to be defined?...




....
This is me.
I can stare into my own eyes
held,
for hours; so close.
But when she searches
these doorways
she catches that lifeless glaze
this frozen distance
in my blank doll face.



{(Behind that smirk my dear
that mask
I see that sadness (subtle)
Agony (intensity)

...I have to look away ----





..................
I have to stop.............

(To be continued...))}











*This piece marks the end of a notebook, and we know how that can be* :D

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© 2009 RubyXero
Published on Saturday, June 27, 2009.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • urbanhumility On Sunday, August 9, 2009, urbanhumility (1158)By person wrote:

    a fragile and honest look inward, well done.......urban

  • Zyrnuvex On Wednesday, July 1, 2009, Zyrnuvex (45)By person wrote:

    All I can say is this is an open and true piece. And that I can relate.

  • RubyXero On Sunday, June 28, 2009, RubyXero (481)By person wrote:

    i just wanna say this piece was actually me looking at only 2 profile pictures. The first stanza was one, the rest another...to which i did have to stop because of "her"...I wish to continue on with it...soon

  • FallenSky On Saturday, June 27, 2009, FallenSky (42)By person wrote:

    It is sad to watch things end, and new beginnings can be frightening

  • A former member wrote: intriguing and bgeuiling. the end means a new beginning, does it not?

  • RubyXero On Sunday, June 28, 2009, RubyXero (481)By person wrote:

    definitely yes...each notebook marks a different phase of my life and i'm anxious to see where this new one will take me. :)

  • Dilated View On Thursday, December 17, 2009, Dilated View (582)By person wrote:

    That's a really cool idea. Not only can you look back and see where you've been but in many ways you can choose where you go. Second stanza hit close to home.

  • A former member wrote: Firstly thats a perfect title for such a memoir,.. it really did speak rather than read,...a confessional of ones self thats rarely witnessed by another,.. courageous thing you are,.. make that a super sized kudos,... well done.


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