I wrote about you
By Lylani
There's a note pad
That is...
Just you
Just us
From the beginning
From the ecstasy of our first kiss
To you leaving me broken
In a million tiny pieces
I wrote it all in bad clichés
and half finished sentences
Tear smeared ink
and crumpled pages
Especially for lonely nights like this
When I feel brave enough to reminisce
I feel every word of your touch on my skin
Your whisper in my ear
Your kiss on my lips
I bask in the agony of
Our bitter-sweet parting
I clamber through ramblings
Of my broken lonely heart
Somehow reading this
I feel I've moved on
But I finished writing mid sentence
Scrawled out my longings
I wrote
Simply
'I just miss you'
And I'm broken all over again
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© 2008 Lylani
Comments on "I wrote about you"
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A former member wrote:
Ah, a book of heartbreak .. ink that was the lifeblood of your heart. Beautiful and full of fragile sorrow. :)
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On Sunday, November 9, 2008, disposable
(103) wrote:
loved this! especially the third stanza--cant tell you how much! write on...please!
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A former member wrote:
Add my platitudes to rest already gathered here.
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On Saturday, November 1, 2008, Leith Plunkett
(237) wrote:
powerful point of view.('I just miss you') these 4 words really sum it up. Lovely piece.
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On Friday, October 31, 2008, Six-Out
(1423) wrote:
This is why I left the one I had, for her, in a place it'd be found. Maybe someone else will take solace in what I felt. Because it killed me every time.
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On Friday, October 31, 2008, NikesRain
(1240) wrote:
i'm agreeing with mikey, this got me... the remembering, the feel and chaos of trying to put it to page... well done indeed
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On Friday, October 31, 2008, Alanarchy
(1168) wrote:
I say this alot lately, so don't take offense. It's a compliment. It means you got to me, the way a good poet should. So, fuck you. Fuck you for writing this. And thanks.