Blurred Stupidity

By RubyXero

Linking myself down
in the soggy
grime filled
gutters.
I hesitate.

Such a firm, strong believer
to be yourself and fuck
everyone else.
Now with age comes
uncertainty?

This sudden empty
critique has left me.
scribbling away thoughts
and
deleting rows.

If my pen. were a microphone,
and my words. my voice.
Then........I am a mute.
Damn pen ran out of ink.

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Published on Wednesday, May 14, 2008. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "Blurred Stupidity"

On Tuesday, May 27, 2008, MESUN (230) wrote:

I'm definitely in tune with the last bit, that's why i use a mechanical pencil and carry a extra lead in my pocket.
On Tuesday, May 27, 2008, RubyXero (481) wrote:

HA!... maybe i'll convert. :)
On Monday, May 26, 2008, Syringe (51) wrote:

nicely done. i like the 2nd stanza
On Tuesday, May 20, 2008, Taunting The Reaper (169) wrote:

You'll find the words, they never really leave. They linger, they change, they dance around you but they're there. An interesting way to express uncertainty.
A former member wrote: I know exactly what you wrote, said, and meant..very real, very nice.
On Thursday, May 15, 2008, elisa (1595) wrote:

vocal depletion ... a hard recovery indeed. nicely done
On Wednesday, May 14, 2008, The Lipstick Factor (287) wrote:

Nice write. This--"This sudden empty critique has left me. scribbling away thoughts and deleting rows." i love