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by the way...
By denver nitze
and by the way...
i just wanted you to know
that you hold my heart
but not my soul
and in this life i must
.go.
.go.
.go.
die i ...will.
but i will not
...die...
.whole.
because it is in death
that the lost
find their souls.
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© 2008 denver nitze
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A former member wrote:
The irony in death...while others feel the loss, you feel the found...soul-soother,lovely.
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A former member wrote:
oh that give me hope like never before, thank you
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On Friday, May 2, 2008, Echoes of Orpheus
(357)
wrote:
A comforting statement, and well written TA, *salutes*
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On Thursday, May 1, 2008, freudian-slip
(236) wrote:
this is the written breath of hope
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On Thursday, May 1, 2008, NikesRain
(1240) wrote:
sullen and whispering... yet there's a quality of strength and the ending breathed promise... excellent
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On Thursday, May 1, 2008, Narcissa
(391) wrote:
Perfect!
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A former member wrote:
....cl.ever wicked end.ing.. .the subtle sureness of this is so good.
blessing+ness
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On Thursday, May 1, 2008, Sparrow
(88) wrote:
You blew me away.
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