g.rasping o.bvious d.isaster

By denver nitze

i'll tear all your eyes out
to release and open them,
i'll hide in caustic shadows
and wear your soul thin.
.
i creep in your shadows
lurking loin tingles within
your soul is mine now
as is your kin.
..
i'll sever your thoughtless thoughts
eat your heart as it rots
.still beating and in your chest.
i don't care if you want me
i don't care what you need
it is my soul i take care of
and it is my soul that i feed.
...
i'll hide in your closet and wait
for your dreams
i'll slip into my carrion costume
and scare the fuck out of you with it.
....
i'll fuck you and kill you
i'll eat your soul whole
rust all your fillings an ashtray
to empty my bowls.
...
i'll smoke out your eyeballs
breathe deep the fumes
i don't care if you love me
i don't care what you'll need
its my soul i take care of
and my soul that i feed.
..
i'm waiting to tell you i'm waiting to see
the rest of the fucking fucking fuck
fuck fuck can't you see?!?
.
i do what my nature provokes me to do
instinctly i prey i prey now on you
.
it isn't your god now
to him i am dead
he cast me in shadows
severed my head
he tore off my wings
he took out my voice
so i couldn't scream
he loved me so 'deeply' it tore me within
and now i am satans
mother~fucking
first adopted sin
.
tarnished they left me
and tangeled became
you think that you know me
!!i'm fucking insane!!
!
i scream in a whisper
and pray while i fuck
i'm evil beyond evil
...
i'm a bitch
..
a whore
.
a cunt.
.
and if you don't believe me,
ask your fuckin

.
.
.g. rasping


.o. bvious


.d. isaster
.
.

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© 2008 denver nitze
Published on Friday, March 7, 2008.     Filed under: "Fiction" and "Lyrics"
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  • Kurashu On Wednesday, April 2, 2008, Kurashu (29)By person wrote:

    Three words: G. Lobal O. Verhaul D. Evice. Cephalic Carnage did it better, did it first. Sorry.

  • denver nitze On Wednesday, April 2, 2008, denver nitze (256)By person wrote:

    googled that. two completely different ideas. but thanks for lettin me know this one sucks. :) ~ta~

  • Kurashu On Wednesday, April 2, 2008, Kurashu (29)By person wrote:

    It's not so much that this one sucks, it's just that you're getting compared to Cephalic Carnage. You'd have to be like...Atheist or Cynic or Death or some other legendary Death Metal band to survive that. Okay, maybe not quite that extreme, but Cepahlic Carnage is fucking awesome and that's all there is too it. SIEG METAL!

  • SGT Bloth On Friday, March 7, 2008, SGT Bloth (163)By person wrote:

    Wow, I just fell In love

  • TheUltimateOutlaw On Friday, March 7, 2008, TheUltimateOutlaw (44)By person wrote:

    The whole thing is vicious but "i scream in a whisper and pray while i fuck" really seals the deal. Harsh and awesome.

  • Niemand On Friday, March 7, 2008, Niemand (361)By person wrote:

    ...

  • denver nitze On Saturday, March 8, 2008, denver nitze (256)By person wrote:

    thats funny. those are my music marks. i know its a crazy way of documenting musical changes, but it worked, i remembered the song today. thanks for your comments. :) ~ta


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