Blood on Heavens battlefield
By Circe Avalon
In the dieing mists of light
Were soldiers of God
and demons fight
Struggles of a withering soul
The victor announced by the bells tolls
Once for he that is of God
Twice for the unforgiven ones
Can you hear these daunting rings?
For those above or below will sing
Curse his spite or admire glory
Ambitious and courageous story
How many sins? Line them up
And cross off for good deeds wrought
Do they cancel up enough?
To send him peace or is it torture sought?
Bells of sin or bells of woe
Or we may never truly know
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© 2007 Circe Avalon
Comments on "Blood on Heavens battlefield"
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On Friday, November 9, 2007, RubyXero
(484) wrote:
it has a nice liquid transitiony flow...
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On Thursday, November 8, 2007, Chimauron
(87) wrote:
I agree with Sinister, this sounds like something that Lamb of God would sing. Great work, and easily my favorite type of poetry!
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A former member wrote:
I have wrote a few myself on this subject, but admitt freely yours is spectacular in few words. Thats the secret of poetry-cosmic information in few words.