Log In
the =- way -=
By maddin foxxxy
You can never say it's over
you can never see the end
whatever was behind
can always start again..........
If there's a way to be clean
I want to know the way
If there's a way....
I want to find the way
wHo am i
to stay behind
the mask
of my face?
wHo am i
to change my mind
into some
other kind of game?
If there's a way to dream
I want to dream the way
If there's a way......
I want to see the way
A love that flies
is a love remembered
A face that cryes
is a life that rains
inside
Necessity
is this air to breath
and it's not enough
there's not enough of it
for me
wHo am i
to care to live
when i'm
pushed to it?
wHo am i
to close my
eyes
as the truth
hits me?
If there's a way to LiVe
I want to UnKnOw the way
To forget the way........
'
'
'
To go on my own WaY.
Unauthorized Copying Is Prohibited.
Ask the author first.
Copyright 2003 maddin foxxxy
Published on Friday, December 5, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "the =- way -="
Log in to post comments.
-
On Friday, June 24, 2005, SorrowSoul
(54)
wrote:
I really enjoy how each verse builds up line upon line. Very good write.
-
On Tuesday, December 16, 2003, Drea
(1443) wrote:
"If there's a way to LiVe I want to UnKnOw the way To forget the way........ ' ' ' To go on my own WaY." *stares while at a loss for words* ~Drea~
-
On Tuesday, December 9, 2003, diavolessa
(208) wrote:
"If there's a way to dream I want to dream the way If there's a way...... I want to see the way" just wonderful Loved it!
-
On Tuesday, December 9, 2003, GreekPhilosopher
(156) wrote:
Heh... Tao... Hehehehe. Im Really Useless. GPhD.
-
On Monday, December 8, 2003, TropicalSnowstorm
(1705) wrote:
Nice one - some of the imagery in this one is very good! Ciao, T/S
-
On Saturday, December 6, 2003, OLd SouL
(732) wrote:
*snuggles up to maddin* "A face that cryes is a life that rains inside". You're so beautiful. Can I borrow your soul for the weekend? :::OLd
-
On Saturday, December 6, 2003, maddin foxxxy
(358) wrote:
*hugs and claims Old soul's back*
-
On Friday, December 5, 2003, Midnight Phoenix
(240) wrote:
"Necessity is the air to breath and it's not enough" hit me hardest on this piece. It sounds like you want to take that step to live fully. It's hard to break away from our modest lives and live the way we want.
-
On Friday, December 5, 2003, purr_verse
(1059) wrote:
i love the closing sentiment in this. :) I also think the visual way you arrange your words is great. purr
-
On Friday, December 5, 2003, A Velvet Tongue
(436) wrote:
*applauds you fervently*...well said ...well said indeed!
-
On Friday, December 5, 2003, Lost_Soul
(34) wrote:
Wow, this is truly one excellent poem. I don't think I can quite accurately describe in words how good this poem really is.
maddin foxxxy's Latest Works Feed
Join