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Rage
By Gray Vision
Dormant until now,
Slumbers no more,
An erupted brute,
A catastrophic force,
An eviscerating
touch
A
rude awakening to anyone brought forth,
Berserk nature,
The eye of the storm.
When will it subside?
Only in time,
Only time can tell.
A ravenous appetite,
Consuming all that’s innocent,
Blinded by all wrongs and rights,
On a path of
destruction,
The
thirst for bloodlust
Pursuing Lucifer's will.
The will to kill,
The will to end.
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Copyright 2010 Gray Vision
Published on Wednesday, April 7, 2010.
Filed under: "Reflective" and
"Poetry"
Author's Note:
Feel free to comment or pitch advice, ty.Comments on "Rage"
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A former member wrote:
I like it because it is open enough for your readers to apply it to their own lives yet particular enough that they can taste a little of yours. It sounds like some of my work about struggling with bipolar disorder. It makes you feel, you know? Good work. (Im new by the way i only have one post but I'm glad i came across yours)
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On Friday, March 30, 2012, Malcholm Dark
(810)
wrote:
This is a fast paced, dark piece... this could be any kind of monster, even natural... I was thinking tornado or hurricane... the lines only in time... only time can tell... they say the same thing, almost... I would delete one or the other... I was tag surfing when I found this piece, you should try it... push your monster tag and read some... thanks for sharing... MD
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On Thursday, May 3, 2012, Gray Vision
(425) wrote:
Hey Malcholm, long time no see bud. I hope all is well, take care of yourself and thank you for dropping by(=
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On Tuesday, August 16, 2011, Devilish
(2657) wrote:
Purrrrrrfect!!!!!!! Purrrrrrrfect! I bow!
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On Wednesday, August 17, 2011, Gray Vision
(425) wrote:
*Strokes Dev and lays down a bowl of Friskers to her delight,* hehe thank you for dropping by make sure and check your mail, alrighty take care as always =)
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A former member wrote:
I like how its put together and I wish I could write more around this standard.
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On Wednesday, June 22, 2011, Gray Vision
(425) wrote:
Oh but you can just give it some time and I'm sure you'll be saying, "yep I told you so" haha. Well kayla thank you for dropping by and I'll be sure to retun a favor soon =)
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On Monday, January 10, 2011, SulaMoon
(67) wrote:
Love your work.
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On Tuesday, January 11, 2011, Gray Vision
(425) wrote:
Thank you so much SulaMoon, it's always my pleasure to encounter new members on here, I hope your time here will be as gracious as mine or better. Thanks again for reading and I'll be sure to drop by and see you works for myself =)
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On Tuesday, June 29, 2010, DarkPaladine
(15) wrote:
My comment to you on Rage. Very good writring well said and well done. Welcome to the Zombie man club.
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On Tuesday, June 29, 2010, Gray Vision
(425) wrote:
Heck yes, yoy know how long I've been wanting to join that club? Heh thanks for the comment =)
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A former member wrote:
this is one of those peoms that makes me want to comment, even though i dont know what to say.....write on.....~S
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On Sunday, June 27, 2010, Gray Vision
(425) wrote:
Even though you didn't know what to say, you said something anyways and that says alot. Thank you for commenting =)
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A former member wrote:
a well discribed momment that builds up rage......'path of destruction'...loved it man
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On Sunday, June 27, 2010, Gray Vision
(425) wrote:
Thank you very much ES, I appreciate it =)
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On Saturday, May 1, 2010, theXkevorkian
(65) wrote:
I definitely subscribe to this manner of thought .... I have often been pushed to the breaking point .... Its not pretty because although I hate violence .... I am quite chaotic ...... I relate Thanks for sharing .... Write On :)
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On Monday, July 26, 2010, Gray Vision
(425) wrote:
Kev man, been reading some of your woks here lately, I must say, good stuff I'll have to check out some more soon, thanks again =)
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A former member wrote:
You write so passionately about feelings, something I'm very find of.
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On Wednesday, April 7, 2010, A Life Without You
(146) wrote:
a ton of imagery, a walk threw a mine-field of rage indeed...
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On Wednesday, April 7, 2010, Rowan
(202) wrote:
You've captured rage very well. You've taken that outburst of anger to a new level and defined it nicely. I was entranced in every line, many of which are my favorites. That rage is in all of us waiting to break free of the core to wreak havoc upon the weak. I'll be sure to step out of your way when this fury is unleashed. Nice write.
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