Monologue of a Muse
By Lylani
When you call my name
Know that I was never here
I was the echo of a dream
Bred of a half remembered tear
I was the seed of your insanity
Pure beauty in your eyes
A goddess in need of saving
That plucked the stars out of the skies
I flickered in the torchlight
As you scribed the words of me
Poured your ink into my empty veins
Set the demon of me free
I am the greatest of addictions
Your need to write my all
Undress me in words of angels
Then document my fall
But now you see you held a rainbow
As empty as the breeze
And nothing gives you comfort
Now I bring you to your knees
I torture you in memories
Show what might have been
I whisper in your ear at night
Tease you till you scream
I am unblemished desire
That your longing can't fulfill
Your greatest inspiration
The creation of your will
Am I a muse worth saving
Or the devil in disguise
Only you can tell me
I'm all thats in your eyes
Comments on "Monologue of a Muse"
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On Wednesday, November 12, 2008, Echoes of Orpheus
(359) wrote:
other than "sky's" should be "skies" I really enjoyed this. And take that as a compliment because I usually stray away from pieces with the generic rhyme schemes, but this was well done.
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On Wednesday, November 12, 2008, Lylani
(116) wrote:
oops spelling corrected, thanks for the complement tis much appreciated, I usually avoid writing anything with a rhyme as I usually end up in such a muddle that I end up with nonsensical drivel.
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A former member wrote:
this is so sad... but i really liked it!
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On Wednesday, November 12, 2008, The Lipstick Factor
(290) wrote:
Stellar write--you have captured the fickleness of the muse brilliantly. Hats off to you--this is excellent.
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On Wednesday, November 12, 2008, disposable
(105) wrote:
your skill with words is uncanny. im in awe everytime im before your work. write on...please!
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On Wednesday, November 12, 2008, Aleas
(171) wrote:
It sure can be a mother...