Comments by suicideseason
- "_damn...your writing continues to grow even more powerful...i felt so much conflict in this piece.damn."
Posted by suicideseason on "collision-" by Exodus
- "_oh this is so heavy...deeply sad."Piercing through me like the moon does a bleeding body" ripped me apart.lovely as always,Miss Ex."
Posted by suicideseason on "built" by Exodus
- "_"Faking the eyes I had for you."... wow. where have you been?this is incredible.the last verse is worthy of stealing.thanx,Ex.:)"
Posted by suicideseason on "full" by Exodus
- "_"I am your fake butter cup princess, sway like dandelions"...what a viciously vivid picture that phrase painted in my mind...awesome,Ex.:)tim"
Posted by suicideseason on "lie" by Exodus
- "_awww...the last line is heart breaking... i feel your pain in this one...sometimes you feel so useless...so invisible.nice one,Ex.an emotional powerhouse,for sure.:)tim"
Posted by suicideseason on "white" by Exodus
- "_well...if this is only the beginning,i can't wait to see more.already,i like what i see.especially the last two stanzas.and the last two words...wow.:)tim"
Posted by suicideseason on "throw" by Exodus
- "_this was like having an atom bomb dropped on me...but somehow i survived...all i can really say is this...every word of this piece hurt.every letter.damn.-tim"
Posted by suicideseason on "spider" by Exodus
- "_i can't say enough how much i can relate to the purity of your writing.more often than not,you leave me breathless.-tim"
Posted by suicideseason on " stellar" by Exodus
- "_*nods*...yeah a sledge hammer wielded by the likes of Thor...another pulverizing,emotional write.-tim"
Posted by suicideseason on "Chloris" by Exodus
- "_this is just brutal...when we lay ourselves out there,forget ourselves and allow the love to consume us,it can be very overwhelming to the people who we feel these intense feelings for.i really do feel this poem.wonderful as always.-tim"
Posted by suicideseason on "vacancy" by Exodus
- "_"As truth tells a lie and a lie is my ruin."...my god that is brilliant.as the others have stated,the imagery was awesome...and this was so intense...passionate...wow.thank you.:)tim
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Posted by suicideseason on "shot at the sun." by Exodus
- "_Ex...your words are so inspiring to me.never stop writing.quite impressive piece to say the least.-tim"
Posted by suicideseason on "vox populi" by Exodus
- "..."Tonight is never in the question
Of tomorrow" was so powerful.this cuts deep.the ending was really well done,too.awesome as always,Ex.-tim
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Posted by suicideseason on "asphyxia." by Exodus
- "..."Reaching desperately
To hold nothingness " is a great line that represents so much to me.i really like the over all structure.very compelling.awesome as always,Ex.:)tim"
Posted by suicideseason on "A boy named Christian." by Exodus
- "damn,Ex...it's easier for most people to just see the ugliness...as opposed to seeing someone who needs help.it's easier...and the human race is all about ease...awesome!~tim"
Posted by suicideseason on "Falling cinders" by Exodus
- "wow...very vivid and provoking. "Two hands clasped.
Two hearts bleed " was excellent.i love this.~tim"
Posted by suicideseason on "Illusion." by Exodus
- "whoa...how fucking intense."Not so fast" brings this bad boy to a dead stop.and as soon as it starts back up,the emotion really starts pouring out.thanx!~season "
Posted by suicideseason on "A loss of blood." by Exodus
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