The bitch is screaming..
By Exodus
Um.....you could ask if you wanted to know...only, i wont be able to answer
you..
The dance
Of shadows
Move along
With the stranger
She is lonesome
She is pretty
The moon is hiding
Just under the trees
The streets, abandoned.
Just tonight though.
She was meant to die
Because last night
She fell asleep at 11
And she woke up at 12
Things get blurry
When your eyes swell up
With so much fear
Your legs don’t move
To take you anywhere else but here.
Fear.
He can smell it
They all do
They know what lipgloss
You where
What you take with you
Under the blankets
Only when it storms.
You are special.
Look into his eyes
See his fear.
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Copyright 2004 Exodus
Published on Sunday, January 18, 2004.
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Comments on "The bitch is screaming.."
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On Monday, February 2, 2004, Dancing_Monkey
(1246) wrote:
This still kicks me down into the damn dust of my poetry, burned becourse of this write being so much better. :O) you got great tallent
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On Sunday, January 25, 2004, Griffin
(114) wrote:
really good cool
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On Wednesday, January 21, 2004, flying_fox
(573) wrote:
amazing, love the sharpness of the piece. FF
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On Sunday, January 18, 2004, Spiritus_Frumenti
(341) wrote:
finally i get to see one of your works..you've commented on so many of my pieces and I keep forgetting to look at your stuff...but this poem is very rapturous..i like it...-l-
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On Sunday, January 18, 2004, capt_funguy
(778) wrote:
yet another great piece - thanks ... funguy
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On Sunday, January 18, 2004, stormtalk
(729) wrote:
You've captured the face of fear of the unknown twice... first in words, then in tone... the last line threw me off and made me read it again, too. Definitely an awesome read :)
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On Monday, January 19, 2004, purr_verse
(1059) wrote:
i agree completely, and did the same thing. :) purr
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On Sunday, January 18, 2004, Alanarchy
(1200) wrote:
Very chilling. disturbing in sense. Dark yet still human. I like it.
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On Sunday, January 18, 2004, DeathSentance
(18) wrote:
wow very serious...good write
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On Sunday, January 18, 2004, Dancing_Monkey
(1246) wrote:
wowzers... this swallowed me up totaly.. *putting it as a favorit*