The bitch is screaming..

By Exodus

Um.....you could ask if you wanted to know...only, i wont be able to answer you..




The dance
Of shadows
Move along
With the stranger
She is lonesome
She is pretty
The moon is hiding
Just under the trees
The streets, abandoned.
Just tonight though.
She was meant to die
Because last night
She fell asleep at 11
And she woke up at 12

Things get blurry
When your eyes swell up
With so much fear
Your legs don’t move
To take you anywhere else but here.

Fear.
He can smell it
They all do

They know what lipgloss
You where
What you take with you
Under the blankets
Only when it storms.
You are special.
Look into his eyes

See his fear.

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Copyright 2004 Exodus
Published on Sunday, January 18, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Dancing_Monkey On Monday, February 2, 2004, Dancing_Monkey (1246)By person wrote:

    This still kicks me down into the damn dust of my poetry, burned becourse of this write being so much better. :O) you got great tallent

  • Griffin On Sunday, January 25, 2004, Griffin (114)By person wrote:

    really good cool

  • flying_fox On Wednesday, January 21, 2004, flying_fox (573)By person wrote:

    amazing, love the sharpness of the piece. FF

  • Spiritus_Frumenti On Sunday, January 18, 2004, Spiritus_Frumenti (341)By person wrote:

    finally i get to see one of your works..you've commented on so many of my pieces and I keep forgetting to look at your stuff...but this poem is very rapturous..i like it...-l-

  • capt_funguy On Sunday, January 18, 2004, capt_funguy (778)By person wrote:

    yet another great piece - thanks ... funguy

  • stormtalk On Sunday, January 18, 2004, stormtalk (729)By person wrote:

    You've captured the face of fear of the unknown twice... first in words, then in tone... the last line threw me off and made me read it again, too. Definitely an awesome read :)

  • purr_verse On Monday, January 19, 2004, purr_verse (1059)By person wrote:

    i agree completely, and did the same thing. :) purr

  • Alanarchy On Sunday, January 18, 2004, Alanarchy (1200)By person wrote:

    Very chilling. disturbing in sense. Dark yet still human. I like it.

  • DeathSentance On Sunday, January 18, 2004, DeathSentance (18)By person wrote:

    wow very serious...good write

  • Dancing_Monkey On Sunday, January 18, 2004, Dancing_Monkey (1246)By person wrote:

    wowzers... this swallowed me up totaly.. *putting it as a favorit*

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