there is nothing left of me....but you...

By Exodus


I wish it would pour.
Because
I’m too dry to cry
Is it alright
To want the pain
Because I feel nothing
No one ever said
It was better that way

Something about you
Is so beautiful
I cant contain you
And that kills me
So I will watch from the crowd
You will never know
I exist
When all I want
Is to reach out
And grab your hand
Because I know your pain.
And you know mine.

Take my hand.

Walk with me.

You and I will

Get lost

In the rain


Never to be found

Or hear of

Again.



Someday.....

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Copyright 2004 Exodus
Published on Saturday, January 17, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Solace On Saturday, January 17, 2004, Solace (1069)By person wrote:

    Touching and sorrowful, the perfect compliment to my current mood. Almost brought me to tears, wish it would rain...

  • stormtalk On Saturday, January 17, 2004, stormtalk (729)By person wrote:

    Haunting and hopeful... like the ghost of a child too young to die... I love how it ends, just walking into the distant rain... so simple and beautiful.

  • Ideas On Saturday, January 17, 2004, Ideas (50)By person wrote:

    Beautiful and so sad...

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