all fire :::: vehemce::::

By Exodus



Oh I could just melt into you

Like summer baby

To taste your fire

And breathe your wonted kiss





To feel your vindictive body crave



crave
all of me



Somehow I needed

This everything from you.







Flooding my hollowness with a fuse. and i caught fire.

A virile memory that I cant take.



take me.



dont ever stop burning



We are made of fire,

both
Dead stop electric



I wont stop until




your body focuses on mine




If just for another night.












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Copyright 2005 Exodus
Published on Sunday, October 16, 2005.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: this was turbulent and high sexed...me likey.

  • Sin On Friday, March 2, 2007, Sin (1135)By person wrote:

    there is no fire without passion and this is on flames...steamy write to say the least ~kristy

  • A former member wrote: Aflame...left me crispy and cravin' more...damn, now that's hot!

  • A former member wrote: So sensual and passionate, lovely, desire, beauty, heat....all of it

  • glasshouse On Monday, October 17, 2005, glasshouse (530)By person wrote:

    this danced across my eyelids. beauty. it was liquid flame. perfectly executed. -Glass

  • A former member wrote: .."I wont stop until/your body focuses on mine"..This seemed to me provocative and nerve-driven .. delicious write, darling.

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