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Feeling for you. and never giving up.
By Exodus
The muted agony
Of lavender fields
They flow with the storm’s demise
The sun going out with the glow
Of an early summer fire
Dying under the wind
A kiss to the sand
“Goodbye again”
“I sold you the lies”
I thought its what I wanted
I was so wrong to fall
And tie myself to you.
Not losing it.
Not losing it.
Your name is everywhere
Written in its bitter frustration
Messiness in my emotional exploitation
Locked myself in the bathroom
Washed up on the sands of ‘goodbye again'
And wanting it so bad….
Again.
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Copyright 2004 Exodus
Published on Thursday, April 8, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Feeling for you. and never giving up."
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A former member wrote:
I agree with Narcissisme, Intense. I like this piece.
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A former member wrote:
This is intense as well as inspiring...great.
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On Tuesday, April 13, 2004, stormtalk
(727)
wrote:
Somewhere between summer suns and bitter tears... very beautiful. I like how it begins with "muted agony" and ends with "wanting it so bad... again"... nice transition.
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On Monday, April 12, 2004, Spiritus_Frumenti
(340) wrote:
the first stanza is a poem all by itself...a majestic piece, i must say...your work always so delightful...-l-
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On Thursday, April 8, 2004, Lynaes
(854) wrote:
Absolutely beautiful. So much grace, I really felt the esscence of your words. I particularly loved the first stanza. Gorgeous work. ~L
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A former member wrote:
great imagery, especially in the first two stanzas
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On Thursday, April 8, 2004, DoctorAsh
(371) wrote:
this is a good example of whats truely poetic. wonderful piece of writting. le ' beautiful
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