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throw
By Exodus
Tasted your vitriol
Tastes like summer
Ignite your fire
Twice the indecision
What? This is real.
Intertwined in the rush
Of confusion, a beatific atmosphere
Sheltered truths
Take me away
The splendor
Of not knowing.
Caring.
Sheltered::
What? This is real.
I promise I will not break you.
You run.
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Copyright 2004 Exodus
Published on Wednesday, April 21, 2004.
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"Poetry"
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A former member wrote:
What a clear image I have in this mind...this piece was all about the imagery...devouring it whole.
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On Thursday, April 22, 2004, Spiritus_Frumenti
(341)
wrote:
your work always has a spatial ambivalent and meaningful quality to it, even if at times its impossible to know what exactly it means...-l-
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On Thursday, April 22, 2004, stormtalk
(729) wrote:
Vitriol like summer... that's quite an image. Your newer work reminds me of Clementine's newer work, but with more description and fewer nouns. Interesting stuff... I can't wait to see what develops next!
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On Wednesday, April 21, 2004, capt_funguy
(778) wrote:
the convincing half of a whole ... dig this wildy .... funguy
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