built
By Exodus
You’re a special light
Made for deceiving
And we fall into your trap
Because you’re beautiful.
And in many ways
I am just like you
And were loved for the taking
Our hearts tied in knots like blasphemy and sky.
Piercing through me like the moon does a bleeding body.
I am flawless but I am weak..
Cant you see,
for one spilt second.
I thought you were real.
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Copyright 2004 Exodus
Published on Sunday, August 29, 2004.
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On Tuesday, June 3, 2008, Morbid_insanity
(74) wrote:
very thought provoking
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On Saturday, September 11, 2004, Spiritus_Frumenti
(340) wrote:
"I am flawless but I am weak.. " a contradictory statement that is so real...there's a lot behind this...-l-
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On Sunday, August 29, 2004, stormtalk
(727) wrote:
A haunting and beautiful phantasmagoria... short and powerful... I've read it no less than 5 times, now... great write!
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A former member wrote:
Perplexing.