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stellar
By Exodus
You cant explain
The breakdown of the stars
And the philosophy.
They seem to be falling
It is time we spun out of control.
We’ve been in trouble for so long.
Hate me now.
They pierced the navy with their edge.
X just like me X
They’re here to die alone.
And feel the pain weigh down
From the oceans dwell
You can understand
Why I don’t care tonight.
:::So I bleed. And I breathe no more:::
Amy.
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Copyright 2004 Exodus
Published on Sunday, April 18, 2004.
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A former member wrote:
I think the vagueness in this made it extremely worth reading again and then again. Very dreamy write, enjoyed it. ~ship!
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A former member wrote:
The flow of this...so graceful and elegant...tragically beautiful.
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On Wednesday, April 21, 2004, stormtalk
(727)
wrote:
Entirely surreal... reading this is like trying to interpret a dream: it can make sense in many contexts, but you're always left wondering which one, if any, are correct. Fun!
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On Sunday, April 18, 2004, gracefullytorn
(61) wrote:
your genius surpasses my intelligence
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On Monday, April 19, 2004, Anth
(1126) wrote:
man this is sublime, i love the first stanzas, this is stellar work, elegant. theres just so much here, im awed
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