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Ten 3 (Lib(ra)
By Exodus
One mess of fallen pieces
Missing from this puzzle
“We’re all nothing inside”
And with the running
Away from yourself.
You hate what you see
And you turn, its easiest
But I’m all over here
Waiting. And watching.
I know what you feel
I felt it burning hot inside your eyes.
you stared.
And admired.
And I felt you fall
Through the windows of glass
And indecision
I felt you cut me
But I held those tears
Because I know where you’re running.
I’m always with you.
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Copyright 2004 Exodus
Published on Thursday, April 8, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Ten 3 (Lib(ra)"
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A former member wrote:
Heh this was fantastic. The light at the end of the tunnel that lets us know someone's looking out. Good looking out. ~Ship!
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A former member wrote:
I've been yearning for poetry with this flow...this essence of emotion...this raw feeling...I love your works.
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On Tuesday, April 13, 2004, stormtalk
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wrote:
Cryptic and rhythmic, yum. I miss poetry, I wish my brain were less dead lately so that I could write and comment more... sigh sigh... I'll be back, don't you worry, dear Carrot.
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On Monday, April 12, 2004, Spiritus_Frumenti
(341) wrote:
a powerful shot of honest emotion..."And with the running Away from yourself. You hate what you see And you turn, its easiest "...i liked this stanza in particular...great write...-l-
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A former member wrote:
I've read other works here with similar themese but this one just hit me in a very powerful way
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