Comments by whisperingwalls

"Great awareness in this piece, as if you were able to take a step back from your life and describe the.comings and goings. Its unfortunate the contemplation of suicide is chosen. If you realize you are not a clone, that you are simply pretending to be ordinary, that should be an awakening! A beautiful triumph of individuality, to discover who you were truly meant to be. Not to mention you have a way with words. Nice write. "
Posted by whisperingwalls on "Loss of Life, Loss of Self" by Jennanselmo

"I enjoyed the blue imagery and flow. Flawless"
Posted by whisperingwalls on "_In" by anaksunamun

"I share your passion for our wise winged friends. Glad you enjoyed this piece! "
Posted by whisperingwalls on "A Romance of Ravens;" by whisperingwalls

"The last stanza left me dumbfounded, in contemplation of lost time, such brilliant imagery. Writes Like a Baritone Howl to the Moon "
Posted by whisperingwalls on ". . missing . . " by NikesRain

"Thank you, your imput is always appreciated. I found humor in this because the first draft of this poem was written in a leather bound jounal x)."
Posted by whisperingwalls on "A Romance of Ravens;" by whisperingwalls

"Much appreciated! Corpses claustrophobic is one of my favorite lines as well.. And the second line was a reflection on materialism. "
Posted by whisperingwalls on "A Romance of Ravens;" by whisperingwalls

"Much appreciated. I wanted elegant darkness to define the piece. I enjoy pause and silence. "
Posted by whisperingwalls on "A Romance of Ravens;" by whisperingwalls

"The Waking Dead* I'm glad you enjoyed this piece. "
Posted by whisperingwalls on "A Romance of Ravens;" by whisperingwalls

" enjoyed the casual comfort of the setting, and how the calm drew such a lucid work. "
Posted by whisperingwalls on "How a Poet Tips His Waitress" by lupus tenebrae

"you conversed me.. within the first stanza... you recruited me.. if you wanna.. within these waves i've lost my say.. within these waves I envision.. your vision.. lost within the waves... Night and Day.. this tempest capilutrated capricious..waves. "
Posted by whisperingwalls on "Temptation" by BetaWolfinVA

"Deep. not much to comment, as this was solid. I sensed themes of time and war; care to elaborate?"
Posted by whisperingwalls on "deployed" by Grey Lies

"Raw- hits the point home. I like the realist imagery."
Posted by whisperingwalls on "Suit and Tie" by Dreamscape

""Illuminate defiance, start the riot Eliminate the giants, Illuminati over science." This was a brilliantly crafted write, guess David has the upper hand. "
Posted by whisperingwalls on "Eclectic in an Electric Age" by Alchemist

"I like how the title plays upon itself; I interpreted it as an oxymoron, though not sure if that what was intended. Don Juans boss. I like your imagery, I related strongly to the poem, which is a kudos to the writer."
Posted by whisperingwalls on "Simple madness" by dumbone

"Digging the soul and message behind the words, just need to polish the presentation and delivery. Poetry is an evolving process. In response to the message, revel in reality and fiction- they find a way to intertwine."
Posted by whisperingwalls on "Untitled" by QuartzAl18

"This is deep, wishing well style. ;sparks in the dark."
Posted by whisperingwalls on "rainbows in the dark. " by Dei

"This is artistry at its finest, I wish I was a jack of all trades, and could dip my brush in rays, but when I put pastel to plaster, it decays before my simple eyes, so still I write. Thank you for illustrating colours, showing us a mural, behind which holds endless substance, but by wary eyes will never be seen"
Posted by whisperingwalls on "It's like Cinderella met Dali. (with Six-Out)" by Dreaming in Stanzas

"Beauty is in the eye of the beholder.. You painted soulful poetry from an everyday scene, nicely done.. could use some dreamless slumber right about now XD"
Posted by whisperingwalls on "Soulful Window" by With love_Crow

"You gave love so many different faces and forms in this piece. It comes across as a double-edged blade, what can bring us the most pleasure can also cause us the most pain; The heart tends to amplify things in such a way. it also helped me sort through some thoughts, great write."
Posted by whisperingwalls on "Cupids Game" by With love_Crow

"You painted a scene for the senses, then ended with such a powerful line. I really enjoyed this, great write"
Posted by whisperingwalls on "Light Rain Observations" by Blood Saga

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