Suit and Tie

By Dreamscape


I have a suit made out of liquor
I have a tie made out of pills
And the devil is so eager
That tonight we are dressed to kill
I have a fake friend in my backseat
I have a stranger on my lap
There are ethics in me somewhere
But I just can’t find the map

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Copyright 2012 Dreamscape
Published on Tuesday, December 4, 2012.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Jonas Robinson On Monday, January 14, 2019, Jonas Robinson (848)By person wrote:

    This reminds me of a Showtime presentation called, "Nurse Jacky." It might be worth the watch to you. I also like the ending about the map; It reminds me of when I was first writing during the time of being stoned. "Map it out," I kept saying to myself. :)

  • cogitative On Friday, February 10, 2017, cogitative (88)By person wrote:

    you spoke from a place in my mind

  • Phalanx On Friday, October 4, 2013, Phalanx (628)By person wrote:

    You wrote this poem like you would build a house and I like what you've done with the place. This takes me back to a place I enjoy remembering. You're a good addition to this community, as strange as it can be. don't know how long you've been here but, I'm glad you came. Nice job.

  • A former member wrote: you're killing me, man.

  • A former member wrote: I love the metaphorical value of this! sweet!

  • Dreaming in Stanzas On Tuesday, January 1, 2013, Dreaming in Stanzas (293)By person wrote:

    Great introductory to Darkpoetry! Those last 4 lines were sheer perfection. I know I'm a bit late but welcome, stick around.

  • A former member wrote: Thanks for the comment on mine man. I loved the last two lines. Morals in me somewhere but I just can't find the map. Really nice piece.

  • Killerdemonchick On Thursday, December 6, 2012, Killerdemonchick (53)By person wrote:

    hey welcome to DP. You definately belong here:)

  • Devilish On Thursday, December 6, 2012, Devilish (2633)By person wrote:

    Well fuck me. damnnnn .. hello there new poet. welcome to darkpoetry. hell yeah.. this made my night. ive been waiting for you. my work is highly offensive but there are many you may like here, a flavor for every taste. if you eva need anything i'm a click away. Scholar

  • Dreamscape On Wednesday, December 5, 2012, Dreamscape (22)By person wrote:

    Thanx a lot, I appreciate the feedback

  • whisperingwalls On Wednesday, December 5, 2012, whisperingwalls (210)By person wrote:

    Raw- hits the point home. I like the realist imagery.

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