Light Rain Observations
By Blood Saga
I hear the Goddess in the rain,
falling lightly against pavement.
Then the engine of a city bus roars,
brakes squeaking
as it drives away,
and a car horn blares in frustration.
This woman walks by,
her sandals flapping on the wet sidewalk.
It's a warm night, humid
but the air is cool and moving,
so she will not take the bus home.
The rain stops.
Maybe she took it with her.
I am alone in a city where
no one hears anything.
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Copyright 2012 Blood Saga
Author's Note:
Inspired by a brief glance out the window.Comments on "Light Rain Observations"
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On Sunday, August 5, 2012, Invisible Girl
(134) wrote:
You captured the essence of a moment so well I was transported there..impressive
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On Tuesday, June 19, 2012, whisperingwalls
(210) wrote:
You painted a scene for the senses, then ended with such a powerful line. I really enjoyed this, great write