A Romance of Ravens;
By whisperingwalls
Dancing at the edge of an uncovered grave
A swirling cascade of moonlit memorials
;A Romance of Ravens.
Here
the buried
and forsaken
weather shallow tombs
of plush
and velvet
Corpses Claustrophobic
; Dreaming of Air.
Oh Woe
Woe
The Waking Dead!
fill row upon row
with discordant moans
clutching to their
heirlooms
And like an Undertakers lantern
;Snuffing out lost souls.
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Copyright 2014 whisperingwalls
Published on Monday, July 28, 2014.
Filed under: "Reflective" and
"Poetry"
Author's Note:
A Ravens Remorse.Comments on "A Romance of Ravens;"
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A former member wrote:
I love your style.
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A former member wrote:
Thank you. By the way, I'm girl. :-)
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A former member wrote:
This is deliciously dark and gothic and just all around beautiful. Loved it!
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On Saturday, August 2, 2014, whisperingwalls
(210) wrote:
Glad you enjoyed this work, I love the beauty and elegance I was able to bring out of the dark.
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A former member wrote:
It is always a pleasure for me to read a beautiful and dark piece.. And ravens are one of the greatest creatures to open the mind and the spirit to an inviting place of desolation and peace.. I could see the ravens before my eyes.. Cool imagery! Thank you for sharing! :)
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On Tuesday, July 29, 2014, whisperingwalls
(210) wrote:
I share your passion for our wise winged friends. Glad you enjoyed this piece!
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On Tuesday, July 29, 2014, NikesRain
(1240) wrote:
like opening a long closed book of classic work, etched leather and time stained pages... the tone and feel more weighted with its language but no less graceful... well done
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On Tuesday, July 29, 2014, whisperingwalls
(210) wrote:
Thank you, your imput is always appreciated. I found humor in this because the first draft of this poem was written in a leather bound jounal x).
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On Tuesday, July 29, 2014, anaksunamun
(88) wrote:
Corpses Claustrophobic... I really love that, and also "clutching to their heirlooms" . Really cool piece.
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On Tuesday, July 29, 2014, whisperingwalls
(210) wrote:
Much appreciated! Corpses claustrophobic is one of my favorite lines as well.. And the second line was a reflection on materialism.
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A former member wrote:
Marvelous. I'll confees to being reminded of the tv show on the line "the walking dead". The final two are wonderful though.
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On Monday, July 28, 2014, whisperingwalls
(210) wrote:
The Waking Dead* I'm glad you enjoyed this piece.