Comments by lupus tenebrae
- "Truly a dark write my friend, this poem is definitely how schizophrenia can be, trust me I know. "A corpse decayed in settled dust" chilling image indeed, thanks for sharing."
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Schizophrenia" by HeadpatSlut
- "I definitely see Poe in this write, I can tell cause he is also my favorite writer. I enjoyed it, very much, Poe would probably admire the darkness of this work, as do I. Well done."
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Loving Nightmare" by HeadpatSlut
- "For not being a cutter yourself, it's one of the best suicidal poems I've read. I used to cut when I was younger, but a friend of mine literally smacked some sense into me. Well done, thanks for sharing. "
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Masochism" by HeadpatSlut
- "An awesome tribute, I liked how you used the album names within the poem. Much violence, sounds like my kind of carnival, I could imagine this in song form as well, well done, thanks."
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Dark Carnival" by HeadpatSlut
- "I can see a brutal army, cutting limbs, bashing skulls, and celebrating on their remains. Well done, brutal just like metal, thanks."
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Our Anthem" by HeadpatSlut
- "Hell yeah, faces melting, powerful metal in the background, violence. Truly a statement I can live by, long live Relentless Metal, may the world be flooded with its sound forever."
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Relentless Metal" by HeadpatSlut
- "Another epic Nordic write, I love these battle scenes you play out, they're so realistic, the pain of the arrows lodged into flesh, I can feel it, well done, thanks."
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Eternal Glory" by HeadpatSlut
- "Very serene, collected, it reminds me of my beach trips in the past, you hit the nail on the head, the waves definitely give that kind of feeling, well done, thanks."
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Breaking Waves" by HeadpatSlut
- "Excellent brutal write, such a great depiction of an end to a bloody battle, I could just smell the death in the air, the dismembered corpses, the residual anger, very good, thanks for sharing."
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "A Feild After Battle" by HeadpatSlut
- "Such an amazingly gory picture this painted, and satisfied my evil appetite :) this was bad ass write if I do say so myself, thanks for sharing."
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Sheild-Wall" by HeadpatSlut
- "I sympathize, such a heartbreaking write, that was very good, and such things are so hard to talk about, let alone write, thanks for sharing such an emotional piece. "
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "They Have Departed" by HeadpatSlut
- "Very nice write, it paints a picture of pointless breathing, I really liked this message of not wondering what's beyond the light, for it's a wasteful endeavor. Thanks for sharing."
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "On Philosophy" by HeadpatSlut
