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Let Me Bleed
By HeadpatSlut
Let Me Bleed
Trapped alone, nobody near-
And not one soul to tell-
Although I cry, you can not hear-
I
have no lie to sell.
You're far away, and so I'm glad-
Please
do not return-
Although this story might seem sad-
I am content
to burn.
I ask for nothing, not for help-
Nor aid, nor
mortal kindness-
Let me die a beaten whelp-
For me, show only
blindness.
I know I've done you wrong again-
I don't deserve
your loving-
So soon I'm dead, wait until then-
Away from me,
keep shoving.
My life is bleak and heart is black-
In
ruin, broke, and shattered-
Forget me, please do not turn back-
Leave me briused and battered.
The only way to keep my pride-
Is not the path I've taken-
I'm sorry for the times I lied-
Please, let me be forsaken.
Go away, forget my name-
My
final words, do heed-
Let me fade, and die in shame-
Have mercy,
let me bleed.
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Copyright 2010 DK6_Marius
Comments on "Let Me Bleed"
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On Thursday, August 15, 2019, sadistic intent hex
(210)
wrote:
Loe your style so fucking raw.
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A former member wrote:
i wish i could rate this higher, i'm blown away at the emotions reading this sparked in me. the last line just echoes, it's so powerful!
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On Thursday, June 20, 2013, devilsrighthand
(27) wrote:
Wow. I fucking love this, great man
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A former member wrote:
Wonderful piece, man. Loving your unusual rhyme scheme.
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On Wednesday, January 2, 2013, PoetessDarkly
(700) wrote:
damn sure am glad I fuckin' like rhyme this is awesome!
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A former member wrote:
"Please, let me be forsaken" really just got to me. I love this work and how it's like I feel.
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On Thursday, January 19, 2012, Cattarax
(216) wrote:
"Go Away, Forget My Name" exact feelings I have at the moment! Thank you this was exactly what I needed this morning.
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A former member wrote:
god like, its fantastc
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A former member wrote:
Alone and forgotten; my worst nightmare. Deserved or undeserved loneliness is the worst punishment.Excellent.
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A former member wrote:
The power people wield--over others, over ourselves-- is amazing...I love the feel of this despair...this sadness, but yet a sense of control and being controlled...yet another wonderful write...you have amazing skill, my friend
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On Monday, May 2, 2011, Malcholm Dark
(810) wrote:
beautifully written... such emotion, screams with it... a sad tale of despair... thanks
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A former member wrote:
why cant people just let you bleed?
its not there life so why should they care?
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On Sunday, March 27, 2011, HeadpatSlut
(259) wrote:
well, that too, but this is more like saying "Look, I know I've fucked up, and I've put you through Hell, I have no pride left, but it you even think of coming back you're hurting both of us, so get out and stay away, let me die alone, like I know I deserve to, give me this one last bit of mercy that I know I don't deserve, let me die, and let me Bleed.
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On Sunday, March 27, 2011, HeadpatSlut
(259) wrote:
PS. NOT BASED ON MY TRUE ACTIONS
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A former member wrote:
i like your poem. you say things that i feel but can't find words for :)
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A former member wrote:
Beautiful man. I can sense the raw emotion in this piece. Keep up the good work =)
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A former member wrote:
Marvelous piece
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A former member wrote:
The regular meter lures me to read on, and the feeling is so real! I loved every line of it.
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A former member wrote:
Acceptance of fate. I love it.
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On Wednesday, April 21, 2010, Shortnlethal
(65) wrote:
The only way to keep my pride- Is not the path I've taken- I'm sorry for the times I lied- Please, let me be forsaken. i relate to this quiet well..i love the way you depict feelings..^^
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On Thursday, April 1, 2010, jajang829
(23) wrote:
Thank you for these words. We all feel alone and deserving of pain from time to time... in these moments we share so that we may be lifted out together... or maybe so that we can remain where we think we deserve to be... I lean towards the latter, but that's just me. Fantastic write.
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A former member wrote:
Ah, I hate the feeling of being trapped. This was really a great write. Well done. =)
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On Friday, March 12, 2010, punk mc cool
(75) wrote:
this was really good.....i usually get bored reading poetry but this one gave me the chills.....write on bro :D
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On Friday, March 12, 2010, lupus tenebrae
(872) wrote:
I loved it, refusal to accept release from a personal hell, brilliant. Thanks for sharing this.
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On Friday, March 12, 2010, Dilated View
(583) wrote:
Nicely structured piece here. To be content with your vision of your fate while others try to say it should be otherwise. An interesting read, thanks for sharing and welcome to dark poetry.
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