Our Final Hour
By HeadpatSlut
Our Final Hour
The Night is slowly dying-
The
Dawn is to the East-
Alone, in Silence crying-
The nearly conquered
beast.
My home lies dead in plain defeat-
Our castle torn
asunder-
A dying king who we shall greet-
Within the wake of
Thunder.
Now as people perish so-
A mass of pitied waste-
The Shadows high that now are low-
Proceed with all due haste.
Though high and proud as once we stood-
Storm clouds fill
the Sky-
And though we did all that we could-
Now all of us
shall die.
A Kingdom that was torn apart-
A population
dead-
A sword that struck and pierced my heart-
The ground is
turning red.
The Darkness of the Night relents-
And so
all Hope is gone-
A sinner kneeling now repents-
Unto a God
of Dawn.
The time of twilights slowly setting-
I savor
the last of Night-
Advance it forward, Time is letting-
The
World is bathed in Light.
The Sunrise to the East I see-
I try to look away-
My Soul is dying now with me-
As we are
killed by Day.
Comments on "Our Final Hour"
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A former member wrote:
vividly depicted in your words my metal friend! \m/ \m/
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A former member wrote:
Nicely written :)
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On Sunday, May 2, 2010, lupus tenebrae
(860) wrote:
Very tragic write, with the rising of the sun, last breaths escape their mortal tomb. Well done my friend, thanks.
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On Sunday, May 2, 2010, Rowan
(197) wrote:
That was wicked, devil. I like how you compare night and day with renewal and death. Nice write.