A Feild After Battle

By HeadpatSlut

A Field After Battle



Smoke and Ash are in the air,
The ground is wet with Blood-
Countless hundred's dead despair-
And soil turned to mud.

Among the living, I remain-
And for the dead, a pyre-
Shall burn so brightly in the rain-
The bodies go to fire.

The Shield Wall was sixty feet-
Wide and ten rows thick-
The smell of flesh and burning meet-
And Death himself was sick.

I entered with a hundred men-
I left with only twenty-
As Suture's Fire burned again-
And Slaughter came in plenty.

Now, I walk the empty field-
And kill those who who were taken-
My steel Sword, and copper Shield-
A spirit, Godforsaken.

A Storm draws near; I hear the Thunder:
And Thor's great Hammer striking-
The Gods all gaze at us in wonder-
The Blood-sport called the Viking.

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Copyright 2010 DK6_Marius
Published on Monday, March 22, 2010.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Malcholm Dark On Monday, March 22, 2010, Malcholm Dark (806)By person wrote:

    I love a good viking poem... The battles and blood, you nailed it here... thank-you

  • TyrantAvDetForbannet On Thursday, November 24, 2011, TyrantAvDetForbannet (273)By person wrote:

    I'm very partial to the sort of poems.

  • lupus tenebrae On Monday, March 22, 2010, lupus tenebrae (860)By person wrote:

    Excellent brutal write, such a great depiction of an end to a bloody battle, I could just smell the death in the air, the dismembered corpses, the residual anger, very good, thanks for sharing. Scholar

  • A former member wrote: wow... great read! and would make awesome lyrics of a viking metal song! Scholar

  • TyrantAvDetForbannet On Thursday, November 24, 2011, TyrantAvDetForbannet (273)By person wrote:

    yeah definately.

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