A Feild After Battle
By HeadpatSlut
A Field After Battle
Smoke and Ash are in the air,
The ground is wet with Blood-
Countless hundred's dead despair-
And soil turned to mud.
Among the living, I remain-
And
for the dead, a pyre-
Shall burn so brightly in the rain-
The
bodies go to fire.
The Shield Wall was sixty feet-
Wide
and ten rows thick-
The smell of flesh and burning meet-
And
Death himself was sick.
I entered with a hundred men-
I
left with only twenty-
As Suture's Fire burned again-
And Slaughter
came in plenty.
Now, I walk the empty field-
And kill
those who who were taken-
My steel Sword, and copper Shield-
A spirit, Godforsaken.
A Storm draws near; I hear the Thunder:
And Thor's great Hammer striking-
The Gods all gaze at us in wonder-
The Blood-sport called the Viking.
Comments on "A Feild After Battle"
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On Monday, March 22, 2010, Malcholm Dark
(806) wrote:
I love a good viking poem... The battles and blood, you nailed it here... thank-you
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On Thursday, November 24, 2011, TyrantAvDetForbannet
(273) wrote:
I'm very partial to the sort of poems.
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On Monday, March 22, 2010, lupus tenebrae
(860) wrote:
Excellent brutal write, such a great depiction of an end to a bloody battle, I could just smell the death in the air, the dismembered corpses, the residual anger, very good, thanks for sharing.
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A former member wrote:
wow... great read! and would make awesome lyrics of a viking metal song!
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On Thursday, November 24, 2011, TyrantAvDetForbannet
(273) wrote:
yeah definately.