Blood Of The Kings Part 7, Remorse For The Dead (Final Chapter)
By HeadpatSlut
Both men's swords were covered with small chinks where steel had chipped
when they clashed against each other. Aurthor made a strong downward hack,
Zamiel managed to block it, but it threw him off his balance and he stumbled
back, Aurthor followed trough with a strike that knocked the sword right
out of Zamiel's hand. He fell to the ground as his brother closed in with
a thrust aimed at his heart. He was quick to roll to the side so that
the sword just pierced his shoulder as he escaped. It cut a gash in more
than an inch, but still better than had it taken his life. Zamiel stood
up and with his left hand, drew out his seaxe. He jumped back to avoid
another rush of Aurthor's blade.
Zamiel feinted, using the
knife like a long dagger to thrust at Aurthor's right hand, Aurthor jumped
back to dodge it. Zamiel withdrew his arm and like one would do with a
knife in a street fight, tossed up the seaxe only to catch it with his
right hand. He took hold of the weapon with one hand clutching the end
of the blade, something that only a foolish child would do as he mistook
it for a toy. He was no fool. Aurthor made yet another powerful attack
with his blade, Zamiel took the seaxe above his head and blocked it, even
as he did so the blade cut deep into his palm. He winced at the sting
and the pain that followed, but ignored it as he forced the blade into
a sideways push, Aurthor's blade flew out of his hand as he danced back,
Zamiel took the seaxe into a horizontal slash, just barely cutting his
opponent's belly. The cut was shallow and just barely drew blood, but
it was successful in slicing open the thick bearskin.
There
would be no more battling with weapons, it now came down to each man's
ability to fight with bare hands. Trying hard to catch his breath after
the frenzy of attacks, Aurthor spoke. "Who. . . . . .are you?" he panted.
Zamiel grew furious. "I am a bastard son born to a Saxon whore and raised
as a slave in Camelot. I am a sword-Dane and a good friend to Gouthren
and Cedric, I am the son of Uther Penndragon, my name is Zamiel Utherson,
brother to the dead Morgan LeFay, and half brother to the treasonous piece
of goat shit named Artos Penndragon." he proclaimed with scorn and hatred
as a fire burned bright in his eyes. Aurthor gasped. "You, you're the
slave that my father was so kind to." he said, his surprise was replaced
by a sudden insanity, a madness inside of him, he suddenly felt as carefree
and as happy as he had the night he had killed his father and usurped
the throne. "Then it is only fitting that you die the same way that our
damned worthless father did!" he laughed as he took off his bearskin armor
and rushed Zamiel with his wild fists.
Zamiel rolled to the
side and threw off his own coat. He waited for Aurthor to swing his fist
before he drove his knee into his gut and sending his elbow down onto
the back of his neck. Without giving him a chance to recover or even feel
the full impact, Zamiel grabbed Aurthor by the hair and pulled his head
up so as to hit his jaw with a strong upercut. Aurthor staggered back,
but before he could react, Zamile dance back a step and sent a well-aimed
kick square into his neck. Aurthor flew back and fell down, unable to
breathe, he knew his jaw had just been shattered. Zamiel made sure of
that by advancing with yet another blow to the side of the mouth, as well
as a kick to the other side as Aurthor fell back again.
As
Aurthor lay on his back choking, trying desperately to regain breath,
Zamiel walked over and grabbed his Frankish seaxe. He went back over to
Aurthor, who was choking and writing in agony, with bones broken and losing
blood the king tried to crawl away, but it was of no use. Zamiel took
the seaxe and used it to cut off Aurthor's legs at the knees, something
that took far more effort than severing an arm. Though he was battered
and bleeding, hearing Aurthor's wretched agonizing screams brought him
joy, the kind of insane joy that some can only find in the pain of certain
others. After he saw that Aurthor was legless and bleeding more by the
second, Zamiel turned the man onto his back and held the short sword's
tip directly to his chin. "Now, dear brother, I am going to show you what
it is to truly suffer. For every innocent man, woman, and child you have
slaughtered, you will now know to absolute meanings of Pain, Misery, Suffering,
and Agony. . . . . . . . . ." Zamiel said with a sadistic, evil grin as
he used the seaxe like a large dagger, slicing and craving up Aurthor's
face into a bloody mess, every inch he moved the blade drew more blood
as well as yet another scream from his victim.
The sun had
set when Zamiel finally made his way back to the village, seaxe tucked
away in his bearskin coat, holding his longsword like a dagger and lazily
dragging it along, making a cut in the ground as he walked. In the other
hand he carried the horribly mutilated and disfigured head of Aurthor
Penndragon, which was now without eyes, a broken jaw that had been hacked
away at until was no longer a human bone, but a thin piece of something
only attacked to the skull by the joints. The cheek bones were both cracked,
and both eyes had been cut out. Zamiel was covered in blood that was mostly
Aurthor's. Other than countless shallow cuts, a sprained ankle, what may
have been a cracked rib, and broken knuckles that had been bleeding for
at least an hour, he was unhurt and had quite enjoyed his walk back.
When he finally got into the village, he saw it had almost all
burned down, nothing remained but the stone tower, outside of which he
saw one of the slaves with a torch. It was Catherine.
"Catherine,
I'm so glad you're safe." he said as the two lovers embraced. Zamiel dropped
the skull and the sword as he held her close in his arms. They spent several
minutes holding each other before she noticed the remains of Aurthor's
skull on the ground. What're we going to do with that?" she asked, quite
puzzled. Zamiel said to her in a calm and collected voice "The same thing
we would do if he was a real person, we throw the piece of shit into the
fire, now he'll see what the Gods do to traitors."
He walked
into the tower and saw the bodies all piled up there, Irish, Welsh, and
Saxon alike were thrown around the be lit aflame. The bodies were enough
to cover the entire first floor of the tower, and then they were stacked
four of five high, with all the straw in the village on top of them to
fuel the fire. The Saxons were on top, but there was a final corpse on
top of the straw. Zamiel only saw it first as he threw Aurthor's head
onto the pile. It was Gouthren. He staggered back and saw the sad look
on Catherine's face. Zamiel found himself trying hard to hold back the
tears. He managed to do it long enough to look at the body of his friend
and say "Gouthren, friend, brother, please, wait for me in Asgaard, Catherine,
Cedric, and myself will all join you there someday, and we can rejoice
in the Golden Hall." he took the lit torch from Catherine's hand and threw
it onto the pile of bodies as bitter tears of sorrow rolled down his cheek.
"Zamiel, Cedric and his men left hours ago, they had me wait
here for you. He said that he'll wait at a village twenty miles to the
West, but he can only afford to wait for two days." Catherine told him
as she held him, consoling him for the loss of his best friend in this
world. Even as he cried, he felt something warm inside of him as he looked
to the East, the Night had passed and the Sun would rise soon. He heard
birds begin to chirp and off in the distance, a stream ran quietly. He
wiped away his tears and looked to Catherine, staring deep into her eyes.
He saw Hope.
Author's Note:
The Final chapter in the first short story I've written in quite a while, if you decide to comment please let me know what you thought not only of this part, but the story overall, if you've read it all anyway.Comments on "Blood Of The Kings Part 7, Remorse For The Dead (Final Chapter)"
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A former member wrote:
I noticed on your face page you called yourself a warrior. I have no doubt of this since you had to have injected yourself in this magnificant work to write it with such vividness. Great work Devilknight
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On Thursday, May 13, 2010, Riven Waker
(317) wrote:
Truly a glorious tale. The heightening bloodlust and furious intrigue is finally and elegantly counterbalanced by the peaceful final moments, bringing what seems a crucial conclusion
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A former member wrote:
A fitting end to the story. As always, victory is bitter sweet, but with the evils annihilated hope returns.
The story as a whole is probably the most enticing one I've read in a long time. The battle scene descriptions are very vivid and easy to follow (unlike the descriptions of some of the professional writers). There is no unnecessary lingering over the thoughts and the mindset of the characters - the conclusions about those are left to the reader. I appreciate your straight-to-the-point way of expression - no beating about the bush, just saying what you want to say. All I can add is that you have a gift for this kind of writing. Please continue serving us such delicious works! I'm a fan for life.
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On Tuesday, May 11, 2010, lupus tenebrae
(860) wrote:
That was an amazing story overall, I have a really strong taste for revenge tales, and this one delivered. I loved the epic final battle between Aurthor and Zamiel, and his decapitated head. All in all a very enjoyable read *applauds*, well done.