Elven Minstrel

By HeadpatSlut

Elven Minstrel




One lucky evening passing by-
Through mystic woods I chanced-
To hear her sing a lullaby-
To fairies as she danced.

A clearing in the woods revealed-
A lake of water pure-
Ancient binding spells appealed-
Her radiance, a cure.

A maiden not of human race-
Her beauty far too great-
With pale skin and tender face-
Her soul must not know hate.

The tune and tempo both were keen-
This mystic maiden mused-
With grace like I had never seen-
A magic song she used.

The fairies quickly fell to sleep-
The minstrel walked on water-
Of Silence feared I longer keep-
I loved this forest's daughter.

I gazed at her in awe and wonder-
Slowly then, I neared-
I made a sound, my fatal blunder-
She quickly disappeared.

The elven minstrel left me there-
I saw her face no more-
Her song it echoes still somewhere-
I'll hear her nevermore.

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Copyright 2010 DK6_Marius
Published on Tuesday, April 20, 2010.     Filed under: "Fantasy" and "Poetry"
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  • FadedBlues On Sunday, January 22, 2012, FadedBlues (2096)By person wrote:

    ...this is a wonderfully written fairytale, but ends so painfully: an extraordinary vision never to be enjoyed again...

  • Riven Waker On Wednesday, May 26, 2010, Riven Waker (317)By person wrote:

    a beauteous tale of enchantment, and eternal loss - the rhyme was entrancing - thanks for this exquisite write

  • A former member wrote: i think my style of writing relates to yours. mystical,very nicely done.

  • Ravenblade On Tuesday, April 20, 2010, Ravenblade (307)By person wrote:

    very nicely written, loved the visualisations and descriptive coverage of it all, and the floow was smooth. Great write indeed.

  • lupus tenebrae On Tuesday, April 20, 2010, lupus tenebrae (860)By person wrote:

    A very visual read my friend, I could just hear the maiden's voice echoing through the trees. Very good write, thanks for sharing. Scholar

  • Meadowhawk On Tuesday, April 20, 2010, Meadowhawk (160)By person wrote:

    Nicely written. Love the flow and visuals.

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