Our Anthem
By HeadpatSlut
Our Anthem
We Make an oath, we swear it now-
By word and Blood bound to this vow-
We promise that we'll carry
on-
Enslave the Night and conquer Dawn.
We make this
vow upon this seal-
Avenge our dead with vengeful steel-
With
Sword and Axe and Hammer strong-
Immortal skalds shall sing our
song.
When they assault, we'll beat them back-
And turn
their Golden days to Black-
Outnumbered, we will beat the odds-
And if we must, we'll battle Gods.
And When we know we're
bound to loose-
Death is what we proudly choose-
We'll die while
laughing hard as Hell-
Our oath fulfilled, we say farwell.
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Copyright 2010 DK6_Marius
Published on Saturday, April 24, 2010.
Filed under: "Structured" and
"Poetry"
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A former member wrote:
Wow.
Wow.
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A former member wrote:
did you mean to have "our our"? Nice imagery...there is something of nobility here.... I think you may want "we'll" beat them back. Why are we bound to lose (not "loose") ?
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On Sunday, April 25, 2010, lupus tenebrae
(860) wrote:
I can see a brutal army, cutting limbs, bashing skulls, and celebrating on their remains. Well done, brutal just like metal, thanks.
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A former member wrote:
very nice rhythm,reminded me of god of war.
good work.