Comments by MESUN
- "That was beautiful. In my head the rhythm was smooth and sad. I started placing it to music as I read it. Good job."
Posted by MESUN on "More than this" by Vampixie
- ".....(trying to collect my thoughts)......i got nothing. i'm just awash with silence. that made me feel like i needed cigarette. yet again, sinfully beautiful. good recommendation."
Posted by MESUN on "dirty girl on a siren night" by ebonyamore
- "you showed a very beautiful picture of home. you reminded me of places i used to go for trips to get away from this modern world. places where you felt higher just from the clean air."
Posted by MESUN on "Home ... Or what was Home" by Mithiras
- "This piece did exactly what it should. It moved me. Despite the direction is the reminder of my own anger, or in other words my painful longing, it still moved me. Hopefully you're arrows have gone out."
Posted by MESUN on "Flamming Arrows" by Quovis
- "I may not be in the mood to appreciate this like it deserves. Beautifully written, and I felt the emotion. Lucky you. I hope this feeling still remains."
Posted by MESUN on "Destiny" by maddog
- "it's strange that we can put our sadness into beautiful words. it's like a cruel trick imbedding into language. something like brilliantly colored frogs with enough poison to kill you."
Posted by MESUN on "Waging the Hunt" by RubyXero
- "a little voice keeps your mind on reality whenever it starts to wonder. at least it's inspirational for your writing. i'm sure it's also much more."
Posted by MESUN on "Somewhere in the Distance..." by RubyXero
- "if you biggest pain is heartache...i don't think that is so horrible. it means you care about the right things, though you may ask yourself why sometime. just don't let it bring you down. love is a pheonix, out of the sullen ashes turned mud with tears, it can rise new. don't let it petrify."
Posted by MESUN on "*Spring Shine*" by RubyXero
- "wow, that's definitely a new way to say the things i've scolded myself about many times. specially the part about being with someone who just wants you to pay attention to them."
Posted by MESUN on "Raw Birth" by RubyXero
- "i got the feeling this alludes to something that doesn't usually project the darkness that this representation does. what i see it to be is mine and i will keep that way, for what it is to you is yours. a pleasant and stimulating read."
Posted by MESUN on "Implanted Seed" by RubyXero
- "Seemed like the climax of a fairy tale. This feels like it needs more after the first read, but after I re-read it, and let it simmer, it left a comfortable feeling and a soothing blanket of contentment. A very pleasing read."
Posted by MESUN on "Below Silvering Moons" by RubyXero
- "positive thinking, the opiate of the masses. by accepting the evil in the world i feel we can appreciate what good there is so much more. bravo."
Posted by MESUN on "You may think I'm negative..." by AdrianJ
- "Yes, yes, yes, yes, fucking yes! Now that just pulled me along and WHAM! That last stanza and final verse, damn, amazing. I felt the cold and I felt the comfort of being back bed, and then the fear and excitement. Awesome."
Posted by MESUN on "Under Crimson Eyes" by RubyXero
- "I'm definitely in tune with the last bit, that's why i use a mechanical pencil and carry a extra lead in my pocket."
Posted by MESUN on "Blurred Stupidity" by RubyXero
- "have you said these words to her? i'm sure she won't want to listen but that's where you start. i have a feeling you already know that. (toying with an old phrase here) an emotional journey begins with expressing a single thought. i will admit though i am far from someone to give advice in this area. although i will say to remember that we can show someone the way, but it is left in their hands whether or not they'll stay on the path. i'm rambling. keep hopeful, but always ready."
Posted by MESUN on "Sullen Thoughts" by RubyXero
- "well, seeing as i'm a twisted fuck...THAT WAS FUCKING AWESOME!! the imagery was the shit, very vivid. I felt the terrible passion, and the pulsating fear. God this is the the very thing I've been wanting to get out, but i've been having some writer's block. Excellent, fucking excellent."
Posted by MESUN on "Rein of Terror... Pt. 2 ( WARNING: ADULT CONTENT)" by RubyXero
- "This certainly reminds me of all the times I just wished for it all to go away. "Take with you My sorrow My guilt." That line hit me hard. Such simple way to put something so complex. Good write."
Posted by MESUN on "Smudge" by Sigh on Sunday
- "This at first doesn't seem to say much, but I re-read it twice and realized that each phrase said much much more than I first noticed. The "flaking" section I took to represent change, in some form, which itself is a simple idea, but often the details are intricate. I have no problem believing that these simple words thrown together with such precision do represent intricate ideas and feelings. (also I know what spatter is, that's fucking cool. lol)"
Posted by MESUN on "Beneath the Remains" by RubyXero
- "wow, that was, damn, i don't know. it just kept pulling me along and wouldn't let go. it was like i was being dragged towards the edge you spoke of. i feared an endless fall without the promised release of stopping. awesome."
Posted by MESUN on "Mad Mad Mad Mad World" by CelticChick
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