As my tears fall like Leaves... (I am Set Free)

By Organized_Chaos

(For Finding Emo Contest)

Why did you leave me,
I don't understand,
I was always right beside you,
Holding your hand.

I treated you like a fucking queen,
And gave you a place to stay,
I told you that you were the most beautiful girl i've ever seen,
And told you that i loved you every day.

I look into the mirror at my reflection,
Now i stand alone,
Holding a gun in my hand,
I wait for the bullet to cut through my skin and dig into my bone.

The light that once soothed my soul,
(you my love)
Has been eradicated by the dark,
Now i just set here,
Waiting for my soul to fall completely apart.

As a tear falls from my face,
Like leaves from a tree,
I hope that the gun in my hand,
Will soon set me free.

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Published on Thursday, March 20, 2008.     Filed under: "Depressed" and "Poetry"
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  • RubyXero On Tuesday, April 1, 2008, RubyXero (481)By person wrote:

    lol. yup. emo alright. i wanted to read a piece like that tho. your my fav so far in this

  • PaYaSiN On Tuesday, April 1, 2008, PaYaSiN (49)By person wrote:

    i just love being able to relate to other peoples work. ;] Nice ending. =]

  • MESUN On Thursday, March 20, 2008, MESUN (230)By person wrote:

    damn, that sure sounds emo. lol. as much as i tend to get annoyed by those folks for some reason, i gotta admit, some catchy art comes outta that faction. great piece. loved the last stanza.

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