a good friday
By ebonyamore
Or....alternatively....The Passion
church bells are tolling in the distance.. whether they're ringing in joy
or mourning i don't stop to care.
we, the praetorian guard, stand vigil at the window...watching them...judging
them. they know not what we do. if they knew we were here would they be
fucking in such raw and hypnotic oblivion?
maybe...who knows?
'watch how he touches her', you whisper in my ear, hands entwined in my
misshapen ponytail, naked ourselves and barely breathing in the spell cast
in this moment.
i, pressed against the window, you pressed against my back. Your cock,
hard against my ass, stands at attention as a good guard should.
sheets of rain cascade down their window
and ours...
the only light is the flickering of lightning across the gray-dark late
afternoon sky.
the only noise the thunder,
your occasional rough breath...or is that mine?...
and of course the bells.
he pulls himself away...passing over her, he starts at the beginning....kisses
her toes, nibbling them one by one in transcendental delight. his lips
will devour her entirely....skimming every curve and plane as she watches.
She...the victim- willing to give herself over to the feast... eager to
offer him sweet salvation.
you can see it in her eyes 'my body, my blood...yours for the asking, for
the taking.'
and as she cums its as if she's howling, spread eagle as if she's nailed
to the floor..the martyr overcome by such delicious flames and forsaken
by all other sense as she cries out:
'it is finished.
your hands grip my shoulders, fingers curled into my flesh possessively.
i can almost see your nostrils flare as i hear the sharp inhale. you press
me harder against the pane, willing us to be at one with them
in the only true communal experience....the only true body and blood...the
only true satisfaction for sin. as the bells still toll and the thunder
still crackles...
all on a friday afternoon.
Comments on "a good friday"
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On Thursday, April 30, 2009, ALBATROSS
(194) wrote:
HOLY FUCKING SHIT. That's all I can say. And it's definitely in a good way. Wow.
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A former member wrote:
Your Really Good... With your Words. Mmm.. Deviously Delicious.
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On Thursday, April 23, 2009, MESUN
(230) wrote:
sin, very delectable. very moving.
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On Saturday, April 18, 2009, Riven Waker
(317) wrote:
a wondrous bit of pure reading pleasure
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A former member wrote:
*applause* holy Mary and Jojo the carpenter! this is just...wow. I love love love it. you capture the raw passion of the moment so deliciously it makes me want to drool. First poem I've read of yours and im already in love.
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On Monday, April 13, 2009, CjPsychotic
(30) wrote:
An erotica with religious allusions? I was not prepared for this one. On the critical side I'd say go through and restructure it...give it a religious structure to make it pop and sizzle just a bit more. If you've got it in you too, a little bit more length in the meat of it would add to, if it followed suit with the rest of course; it seemed just shy of being complete. On a readers note, the religion and sex intertwining really captivated me and my attention. A good job.
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A former member wrote:
now that's my kind a good friday... the only way to worship. Forceful yet reflective, I think I heard God moan. Thank you.
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On Friday, April 10, 2009, sixsixnine
(476) wrote:
a good friday indeed. very nice :)~ 669~(:
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A former member wrote:
this was scathingly wicked and oh so delicious! I love this piece of poetic erotica...welcome to DP :)