Comments by Midnight Phoenix
- "There's a wonderful flow to your words. The feeling is pleasant, yet dreary. I enjoy its uniform, traditional feel and "possibly" open-ended meaning."
Posted by Midnight Phoenix on "The Quiet of Solitude" by steuss
- "The emotion put into this piece is painfully beautiful. It started vividly and "ended with a point." If I had to pick out the parts I enjoyed, I'd be repeating the entire poem. Nicely done."
Posted by Midnight Phoenix on "It ends with a point ." by maddin foxxxy
- "This piece started a little shakey for me, but got better and better as I read on. I'm not sure how many meanings this poem has, but I can tell there's definately more than one."
Posted by Midnight Phoenix on "The Last Page" by Invader Lyn
- "You have a very interesting and appealing flow to this. Reading it was enjoyable and almost adventurous. Nothing felt out of place, but it wasn't so smooth that it was boring. I can't explain it, but there's just something really entertaining about this."
Posted by Midnight Phoenix on "My Duality Speaks as One" by WinterGrave
- "Very quick indeed. I think many of us have had this flash of emotion at one time or another. I like how the single thought is given just enough character."
Posted by Midnight Phoenix on "Goodbye" by Mistress Morbid
- "I have to agree with Old Soul. The beginning and ending felt very natural and comforting. The "I carry the skies" stanza definately held a lot of weight (no pun intended)."
Posted by Midnight Phoenix on "Entre Brazos" by maddin foxxxy
- "You seem to be a very analytical person. It makes for very interesting reads. Way to be a thinker, but don't get caught overthinking everything!"
Posted by Midnight Phoenix on "Wrapped in lies" by nightshade
- "A vivid piece, but I must be honest when I say I think the main character is a coward. I like the style and images you used here. You weren't trying to be vague, nor artsy about it. Nice and clear."
Posted by Midnight Phoenix on "Too Late" by myscreamsilenced
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