Your Hate

By nightshade

As I look into your azure eyes
I float upon the ocean of your soul
As your lips caress my skin
I sit and wonder if you can dispel the darkness within
You light a fire that dwells inside me
And sheds a little light allowing me to see
But a burst of pain, puts out the flame
My heart starts to turn cold
And regret causes my mind to fold
So many burnt bridges left behind
Yet somehow I feel that I was blind
Blind to the love given so free
Never realizing that it was meant for me
Probing and searching for some type of hate
Telling myself I didn't deserve it
That it was my fate
But yet here I am asking you to stay
Just hold me close keep the pain at bay

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Published on Sunday, February 22, 2004. Filed under: "Poetry"

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Comments on "Your Hate"

On Saturday, May 5, 2012, Cassidello (6) wrote:

Hm., I believe we all feel this way at times. Applause to you.
On Sunday, October 3, 2010, Asylum (7) wrote:

Very powerful. I look forward to reading your other works, to see everything else your talent has to offer.
On Sunday, June 25, 2006, Dei (663) wrote:

i like your style of writing. im looking forward to reading more of your posts
On Tuesday, March 7, 2006, monalisamarie (113) wrote:

Very vivid....enjoyed the your use of words to desribe all of the associated emotions
On Thursday, March 18, 2004, Lord Kalgalath (182) wrote:

U agree..the last two lines were my favorite..good work..
On Thursday, March 18, 2004, Lord Kalgalath (182) wrote:

err I agree *smacks typo demons*
A former member wrote: good write. i really liked the ending, the last 2 lines.
On Wednesday, March 3, 2004, BoldSolitude (214) wrote:

great imagery on this. very well written. I especially liked "But a burst of pain, puts out the flame"
On Tuesday, March 2, 2004, WinterGrave (258) wrote:

nice, vary nice.~~~Grave
On Tuesday, March 2, 2004, Midnight Phoenix (240) wrote:

I like the change that seems to occur in our poem. It's quite an inner struggle. I wish you the best!
A former member wrote: i love this poem alot....i like the middle rhyming it flows really nicely.
On Sunday, February 29, 2004, Drea (1388) wrote:

i think so many ppl can relate to this. i know i can. you worded this so beautifully. ~Drea~
On Thursday, February 26, 2004, A Velvet Tongue (434) wrote:

the solace of love...found in anothers arms...ahhh I rememebr the days...*hugs you tightly*..
On Thursday, February 26, 2004, Johny_D_Lewis (467) wrote:

*hugz* it's ok..yeah I think we all feel that way at times. this is a nice one
A former member wrote: Beautifully written...I could really identify.
A former member wrote: i agree w/ nell and suicideseason..i can really relate. beautifully written. =)~lys
On Sunday, February 22, 2004, nell (270) wrote:

i see this in myself alot of the time, although i think you have said it perfectly. You do deserve it! don't ever think otherwise