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Your Hate
By nightshade
As I look into your azure eyes
I float upon the ocean of your soul
As your lips caress my skin
I sit and wonder if you can dispel the darkness within
You light a fire that dwells inside me
And sheds a little light allowing me to see
But a burst of pain, puts out the flame
My heart starts to turn cold
And regret causes my mind to fold
So many burnt bridges left behind
Yet somehow I feel that I was blind
Blind to the love given so free
Never realizing that it was meant for me
Probing and searching for some type of hate
Telling myself I didn't deserve it
That it was my fate
But yet here I am asking you to stay
Just hold me close keep the pain at bay
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Copyright 2004 nightshade
Published on Sunday, February 22, 2004.
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On Saturday, May 5, 2012, Cassidello
(6)
wrote:
Hm., I believe we all feel this way at times. Applause to you.
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On Sunday, October 3, 2010, Asylum
(7) wrote:
Very powerful. I look forward to reading your other works, to see everything else your talent has to offer.
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On Sunday, June 25, 2006, Dei
(665) wrote:
i like your style of writing. im looking forward to reading more of your posts
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On Tuesday, March 7, 2006, monalisamarie
(113) wrote:
Very vivid....enjoyed the your use of words to desribe all of the associated emotions
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On Thursday, March 18, 2004, Lord Kalgalath
(182) wrote:
U agree..the last two lines were my favorite..good work..
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On Thursday, March 18, 2004, Lord Kalgalath
(182) wrote:
err I agree *smacks typo demons*
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A former member wrote:
good write. i really liked the ending, the last 2 lines.
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On Wednesday, March 3, 2004, BoldSolitude
(214) wrote:
great imagery on this. very well written. I especially liked "But a burst of pain, puts out the flame"
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On Tuesday, March 2, 2004, WinterGrave
(258) wrote:
nice, vary nice.~~~Grave
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On Tuesday, March 2, 2004, Midnight Phoenix
(240) wrote:
I like the change that seems to occur in our poem. It's quite an inner struggle. I wish you the best!
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A former member wrote:
i love this poem alot....i like the middle rhyming it flows really nicely.
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On Sunday, February 29, 2004, Drea
(1443) wrote:
i think so many ppl can relate to this. i know i can. you worded this so beautifully. ~Drea~
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On Thursday, February 26, 2004, A Velvet Tongue
(436) wrote:
the solace of love...found in anothers arms...ahhh I rememebr the days...*hugs you tightly*..
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On Thursday, February 26, 2004, Johny_D_Lewis
(467) wrote:
*hugz* it's ok..yeah I think we all feel that way at times. this is a nice one
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A former member wrote:
Beautifully written...I could really identify.
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A former member wrote:
i agree w/ nell and suicideseason..i can really relate. beautifully written. =)~lys
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On Sunday, February 22, 2004, nell
(271) wrote:
i see this in myself alot of the time, although i think you have said it perfectly. You do deserve it! don't ever think otherwise
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