34 thoughts and a Headache

By WinterGrave

In my hole i spend wrenched hours
in my mind
i hide inside my head
for solitude in this world....

but then i start to think

i start thinking....

thinking thoughts
and
thinking about thoughts.
when my thoughts start thinking
i cant help
but I think of more thoughts
then i think to myself
how much it hurts to think of these thoughts
thinking how much it hurts to think each thought
then thinking about placing them in order
so each thought
does not get entangled with the next thought.
it gets so messed up,
i cant think about my thoughts,
i start thinking about not thinking about my thoughts
and it hurts worse to think about not thinking
about my thoughts
then IM forced to think harder about my thoughts
and it hurts more
and entangles more
and I think more
and I think faster
and I think faster
and I think faster
and faster
and faster
and it hurts
and I cant help but think about thinking about the thoughts I think up inside my head.
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.......
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.......
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and now i have a headache.

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Published on Friday, February 20, 2004. Filed under: "Poetry"

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Comments on "34 thoughts and a Headache"

On Wednesday, September 29, 2004, Savannah (218) wrote:

no freakin wonder you have a headache!! Hell, I have one too after that! lol great writing, it was worth it
A former member wrote: I like the way you structured this
On Thursday, June 3, 2004, aXe FactoR (333) wrote:

a well-written piece. the title is very very cool. :)
On Monday, April 12, 2004, purr_verse (1052) wrote:

This is why i suck at meditation. "try not to think about anything"... so then i think about trying not to think... *sigh* Fine piece, this. :)
On Thursday, March 11, 2004, sulkylime (191) wrote:

now that, was a crazy ride.. a good one. i like your title too ! --lime
On Friday, March 5, 2004, Spiritus_Frumenti (340) wrote:

I thank you for writing this piece...thoughts, anti-thoughts...a subject so familiar to me it has become a significant aspect of my character...well done...-l-
On Tuesday, March 2, 2004, capt_funguy (777) wrote:

like a raped ape running rapant through my head ... crazy fast forward man ... funguy
A former member wrote: one word...AWESOME!! it reminds me of myself..always thinking and confused..not knowing where to go..but yet i do...great stuff **D.of.D**
On Thursday, February 26, 2004, nell (270) wrote:

ahh stress headaches stop thinking!!!!! maybe meditate a bit;)
On Wednesday, February 25, 2004, OLd SouL (717) wrote:

crap.. my head is spinning now. :::OLd
On Sunday, February 22, 2004, Midnight Phoenix (240) wrote:

A great interpretation of how a person becomes confused when having too much on the mind. Each thought acts as a wave crashing into the next thought.
On Friday, February 20, 2004, Lynaes (854) wrote:

I love the way you've written this, it really works because I can understand what you're saying. Great work. ~L
On Friday, February 20, 2004, Storm (143) wrote:

This was cool. Tangled up in thinking of you thinking of not thinking of you thoughts now... Great! ~S
On Friday, February 20, 2004, flying_fox (571) wrote:

like a thought in a blender, so are the days of our thoughts. I like this! FF
A former member wrote: I agree with Stellar, it was confusingly unconfusing. I liked the way the speed of the poem seemed to gain as I reached the finish line. ~Ship!