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In the woods
By myscreamsilenced
I toss a rose onto the ground by your feet
Sensing the feeling of remorse and defeat
Memories full of laughter and some of doubt
Others of sadness from when you would shout
You sit up and call me over for a kiss
Me running towards you these I did miss
I open my eyes to find it's only a dream
Along with your life there goes our best team
You had grabbed my hands as we ran through the woods
You told me you loved me and you always could
Bringing me here to show me I was the one
Proving your love by the sound of a gun
In your left pocket I found a letter to me
You said that by doing this you'd be setting me free
I knew that I could love no one but you
So I gave you a kiss and killed myself too
No we're together forever in this wonderful bliss
Being able to savour every second of your kiss
They found us together knowing the truth
They knew we were in love and now they have proof
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Copyright 2004 myscreamsilenced
Published on Thursday, January 1, 2004.
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On Wednesday, July 13, 2011, Blinded_Tiger
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wrote:
"I toss a rose onto the ground by your feet Sensing the feeling of remorse and defeat Memories full of laughter and some of doubt Others of sadness from when you would shout" I realy realy loved that stanza. Some good stuff here. But for me that stanza holds alot, and its flow is perfect.
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On Sunday, February 22, 2004, Midnight Phoenix
(240) wrote:
I find this to be a very heartfelt write. I enjoyed the passionate, unquestionable display of love and the story behind it. Impressive!
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A former member wrote:
Shit man, this is a nice write, I wasnt sure where it was going at first but very nicley done, thanks for posting, yay!
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