...Falling to pieces... (lost in you)

By PointlessX

every time i cry for you
i loose a piece of me
every time you lie
i slowly cease to be.

every time we kiss
i loose another part
every time we fight
a piece falls from my heart.

every time you look at me
and in everything we do
a piece of me leaves
and becomes a part of you.

i can feel the pieces missing
though you dont have a clue
you wonder where i've gone, isn't it obvious?
im lost in you.

everyday we're together
i give myself to you
every minute we're apart
a piece of me dies too.

every time we touch
it's not hard to see
that i no longer have control
because you have all of me.










NOTE: i started writting this pissed off at love and relationships but as i finished & read it over it turned out rather sweet...interesting...

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Copyright 2004 PointlessX
Published on Wednesday, April 14, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: enjoying the site and poems,..p.d.

  • mywristshurt On Sunday, April 23, 2006, mywristshurt (408)By person wrote:

    this is beautiful.. if i would have read this before my ex died i would have melted away and be with them even more

  • Midnight Phoenix On Monday, May 10, 2004, Midnight Phoenix (240)By person wrote:

    I can definately tell that there is some negativity behind the words. I love how it could go both ways. Genius by accident. Great write!

  • xX pretty vacant Xx On Thursday, April 29, 2004, xX pretty vacant Xx (64)By person wrote:

    man i don't know if it's the mood i'm in tonight but this made me cry. it's kinda cute, but there's a sadness to it that takes you in deeper. great write.

  • K_Love On Sunday, April 25, 2004, K_Love (525)By person wrote:

    Awesome fucking write!! I love it so much, flows so well, very emotional ~Kirsten~

  • Lynaes On Wednesday, April 14, 2004, Lynaes (859)By person wrote:

    A eloquently expressed piece, you've captured the saddness and confusion so perfectly. Very nice work. ~L

  • A former member wrote: Amazing...i like how it turns to love from hate....it sounds like me..(my username) i seriously cant make up my mind...but really nice job!

  • BoldSolitude On Wednesday, April 14, 2004, BoldSolitude (214)By person wrote:

    I enjoyed this read, I liked the way you portrayed the blending of a relationship as pieces moving from one tp the other, feels much like that sometimes.

  • A former member wrote: it is sweet but also sad at the same time, at least to me. but that is love, nice write ~serpentine~

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