...Falling to pieces... (lost in you)
By PointlessX
every time i cry for you
i loose a piece of me
every time you lie
i slowly cease to be.
every time we kiss
i loose another part
every time we fight
a piece falls from my heart.
every time you look at me
and in everything we do
a piece of me leaves
and becomes a part of you.
i can feel the pieces missing
though you dont have a clue
you wonder where i've gone, isn't it obvious?
im lost in you.
everyday we're together
i give myself to you
every minute we're apart
a piece of me dies too.
every time we touch
it's not hard to see
that i no longer have control
because you have all of me.
NOTE: i started writting this pissed off at love and relationships but
as i finished & read it over it turned out rather sweet...interesting...
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Copyright 2004 PointlessX
Published on Wednesday, April 14, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "...Falling to pieces... (lost in you)"
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A former member wrote:
enjoying the site and poems,..p.d.
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On Sunday, April 23, 2006, mywristshurt
(405) wrote:
this is beautiful.. if i would have read this before my ex died i would have melted away and be with them even more
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On Monday, May 10, 2004, Midnight Phoenix
(240) wrote:
I can definately tell that there is some negativity behind the words. I love how it could go both ways. Genius by accident. Great write!
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On Thursday, April 29, 2004, xX pretty vacant Xx
(64) wrote:
man i don't know if it's the mood i'm in tonight but this made me cry. it's kinda cute, but there's a sadness to it that takes you in deeper. great write.
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On Sunday, April 25, 2004, K_Love
(525) wrote:
Awesome fucking write!! I love it so much, flows so well, very emotional ~Kirsten~
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On Wednesday, April 14, 2004, Lynaes
(854) wrote:
A eloquently expressed piece, you've captured the saddness and confusion so perfectly. Very nice work. ~L
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A former member wrote:
Amazing...i like how it turns to love from hate....it sounds like me..(my username) i seriously cant make up my mind...but really nice job!
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On Wednesday, April 14, 2004, BoldSolitude
(214) wrote:
I enjoyed this read, I liked the way you portrayed the blending of a relationship as pieces moving from one tp the other, feels much like that sometimes.
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A former member wrote:
it is sweet but also sad at the same time, at least to me. but that is love, nice write ~serpentine~