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Goodbye
By Mistress Morbid
I envision you hanging
pleading for help
but all I do is shake my head
and watch as the life is throttled out of you.
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Copyright 2004 Morbid Derangement
Published on Thursday, February 26, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Goodbye"
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A former member wrote:
Few words, but the image of the dying man, rivulets of blood running from his boots while a shrouded woman silently watches, is interesting. I'd like to see a portrait of the scene.
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On Tuesday, June 8, 2004, sixsixnine
(477)
wrote:
BRUTAL beauty* liking this piece a whole lot *669*
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On Monday, April 19, 2004, SilentStalker
(1066) wrote:
...this speaks vengeance in the fewest amount of words...powerful without saying much, and that is its appeal...nice...I like the visions of rage I see from this...you may have stirred an idea...lol -Darun
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On Monday, April 19, 2004, SilentStalker
(1066) wrote:
...don't you love it when someone's comment is longer than your work...? never figured out how people could do that...lol
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On Wednesday, April 7, 2004, knightmirror
(426) wrote:
wow what can i really say to this.it's been cleared up by every comment you currently have.i enjoyed.knight
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A former member wrote:
Short and sweet, to the point...
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On Tuesday, March 9, 2004, Midnight Phoenix
(240) wrote:
Very quick indeed. I think many of us have had this flash of emotion at one time or another. I like how the single thought is given just enough character.
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On Wednesday, March 10, 2004, Mistress Morbid
(405) wrote:
It was never intially finished, but then I realized it didnt need anything else.
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On Monday, March 1, 2004, Stranger
(264) wrote:
Loved this. Talk about "to the point".
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On Tuesday, March 2, 2004, Mistress Morbid
(405) wrote:
Thank you, I felt no need to add to it.
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