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One Plays a Lament in Reality
By WinterGrave
The wilted flower
echoed my eternity
fade away my lucidity
the stars are my sanity
shifting moonlight
plays a lament
in twilight's decline
this foreverence my hope
derived from fragile dreams
shattered by haunting screams
rebuilt under the stars
hope is my dream
a dream
only a dream
a faded scream
a trapped memory
a motion in time
in silence this orchid shines
under the sky
the moonlights shines
trapped in time
trapped in reality
this E-motion memory
this reality is my enemy
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Copyright 2004 WinterGrave
Published on Tuesday, March 2, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "One Plays a Lament in Reality"
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On Saturday, January 8, 2005, Emptyness Inside Me
(171)
wrote:
very original piece wrote in a unique style, great job ~Emptyness~
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On Tuesday, March 9, 2004, Midnight Phoenix
(240) wrote:
You've got some style WinterGrave. It almost feels otherworldly. Very compelling wordplay and flow. Impressive!
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On Thursday, March 4, 2004, Spiritus_Frumenti
(341) wrote:
certainly there is a great use of verbage displayed here, regarding the lines mentioned in the previous comments. a very honest and, somehow, tender piece..and that picture is your son is very cute...-l-
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On Tuesday, March 2, 2004, purr_verse
(1059) wrote:
"foreverence" is wonderful! The second-to-last line also does it for me. Nice work. :) purr
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On Tuesday, March 2, 2004, Lynaes
(859) wrote:
Wow, so dream like and beautiful, gorgeous lines and wordings. Awesome work. ~L
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A former member wrote:
I liked "the wilted flower echoed my eternity" Good line. +MO+
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On Tuesday, March 2, 2004, capt_funguy
(778) wrote:
very , very cool , .... this foreverence my hope ... that was a killer inparticular ... excellent extension of self here ... cool man ... funguy
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On Tuesday, March 2, 2004, Solace
(1069) wrote:
Many a worthy wordplay in here, such a beautiful relation of words...Truly an oration worthy of praise!
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