Pieces
By cre
Standing on feet that were bleeding
By a cold and crashing sea
Catching a sound in the distance
Like a child gently calling to me
I limped for a ways before seeing
The brokenness under my toes
Pieces of something once different
Fragments of something once whole
I was raining and crying in pieces
I was lost and alone on the floor
I was scattered and tattered and beaten
On the edge of a broken-shelled shore
I fell to my knees without feeling
The points as they punctured my skin
Cradling a shell that was shattered
And crying as I saw her within
She was tiny and silently hiding
In a corner of a very dark room
Child of a father turned rapist
In the shadow of childhood consumed
I was crying and dying in pieces
I was shattered and torn on the floor
I was scattered and tattered and beaten
On the edge of a broken-shelled shore
I gathered the brokenness to me
While my tears washed away all the dirt
Each little shred was a piece of the past
And I held in my heart the hell and the hurt
My fingers imparted to each forlorn bit
The pain and the love that I felt
And there on the beach a new growth began
As among all the pieces I knelt
I'd been shattered and scattered in pieces
I'd been left all alone on the floor
My teardrops were raining forever
On the edge of a broken-shelled shore
I was standing on feet that were stronger
By a wild and beautiful sea
And the song that I heard in the distance
Was the sound of my Soul finding Me.
Awards
Comments on "Pieces"
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On Sunday, January 17, 2010, Wiccad
(124) wrote:
Well deserved poem of the day. Such bravery.My Heart it goes out to you.
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On Friday, July 2, 2004, Demosthenes
(155) wrote:
i havent read anything in a while. starting back up, thinking what better? you, and nothing else. you frighten me, thats how hard it hits, just the right way, flashing. -B
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On Tuesday, April 6, 2004, BoldSolitude
(214) wrote:
I liked the way you always seem to hold onto hope, even if by a thread in your writings. Maybe not so much hope but strength to overcome.
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On Thursday, February 26, 2004, Mistress Morbid
(405) wrote:
Trials and tribulations, then growing stronger. I love this, it shows growing in time with strength.
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On Monday, April 21, 2003, Jonas
(715) wrote:
this gave me the tinglies in my neck that i get when i read words that touch me...i can't even begin to tell you with any adequate words how excellent your work is and how much it means to me.
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On Monday, April 21, 2003, liquid_emotion
(323) wrote:
crashing into life.... inspiration at it's finest.
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On Tuesday, April 15, 2003, KittyStryker
(710) wrote:
Good for you, puddin pop! ;)
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A former member wrote:
You are ingenious....Perfectly written!!
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On Monday, April 14, 2003, GreekPhilosopher
(156) wrote:
Superb Peice Of Work Here Cre... Every Time I Read Something Of Yours I am All The Better For It, And For That I Thank You.
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A former member wrote:
vastly amazing; i cant really bring any other words to mind at the moment, except maybe that you ARE the ultimate shiznit
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A former member wrote:
this is very powerful. the emotions are all expressed clearly, and the imagery is as if I were watching it on a high definition TV. beautiful. :)
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On Sunday, April 13, 2003, shadowsinthelight
(146) wrote:
Another good song, Keep writing, S.
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On Sunday, April 13, 2003, Stranger
(263) wrote:
Incredible. Powerful ending.
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On Saturday, April 12, 2003, Sky Singer
(153) wrote:
beautifully written.... the ending is just... so ...wow. i can think of no other word to explain how this made me feel. Phenomenal piece
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On Saturday, April 12, 2003, Six-Out
(1423) wrote:
Jane, you are one of the best writers I have ever had the pleasure of reading. If you ever stop, I will hunt you down, take your brain, and connect it to a writing machine of some sort, you get the picture. Keep it up.
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On Saturday, April 12, 2003, cre
(410) wrote:
Hmmm, I might like the prospect of you hunting me down :P
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On Saturday, April 12, 2003, SnowQueen
(59) wrote:
I love it. The transformation and the ending.. I love it.