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.clocks-and-mirrors.
By Six-Out
clocks and mirrors.
they all tell
the same
lies.
if you ask me.
a dream of juxtaposed - almosts.
trigger finger fantasies. and silver spoons.
tossed aside. here.
and.
dressed to kill . culture shocker
with a mission to mask indecision.
there.
time is a god of the mind.
and we're all mind-gods. in disguise
minute hands like sandpaper .handshakes
the seconds speak volumes. if.
you're willing to listen.
the hours screaming bliss.
as the reflection relies on indifference.
glass cages- and ticking timebombs.
both can kill you. if.
you'll listen.
illusion is a tool.
and the clocks tell lies in the form
of reflections. nostalgia.
we're built on image- and distrust.
and the mirrors scream ::sleep.
they all tell.
the same.
lies.
if you ask me.
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© 2006 Six-Out
Published on Saturday, March 25, 2006.
Filed under: "Philosophical" and
"Poetry"
Comments on ".clocks-and-mirrors."
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On Thursday, December 1, 2011, sIo
(926)
wrote:
I really like this. Something about it seems different than anything I've ever read of yours.
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On Monday, May 1, 2006, PoeticHellion
(191) wrote:
"dressed to kill . culture shocker with a mission to mask indecision" Mmm, this poem is so... true. I couldn't agree with you more. You are fabulous.
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On Friday, April 21, 2006, Spiritus_Frumenti
(341) wrote:
if you ask me, this is the kind of work that should mandatory in all schools and universities. wise and poignant. remarkable...-l-
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A former member wrote:
masterfully wrought.-silver
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On Wednesday, April 12, 2006, AniDayz
(820) wrote:
yessah.
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On Thursday, April 6, 2006, antiScripsony
(30) wrote:
that was the best ending i've seen in a while.
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On Friday, March 31, 2006, Rachel
(213) wrote:
I can't remember if I told you already or not, but I really love this. You'll never lose the ability to touch my soul...
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On Thursday, March 30, 2006, Anoblechicken
(38) wrote:
poo poo your beautiful
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On Tuesday, March 28, 2006, veingo
(532) wrote:
Damn! There is NO question, that you are very good, at what you do. ^V^
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A former member wrote:
deep... love the images: time and reflection seem to be inseperable. time... god of the mind, sounds reminiscent of Kant. the minute hands line/stanza is killer
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On Monday, March 27, 2006, Sin
(1168) wrote:
meh...so much for not being about to write pfftt!
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On Monday, March 27, 2006, Six-Out
(1435) wrote:
I can't. I stole this from the other Jon.
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On Monday, March 27, 2006, Sin
(1168) wrote:
liar!
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A former member wrote:
"dream of juxtaposed - almosts" - beautifully said. "the mirrors scream ::sleep" - Intriguing and insightful. This is terrific work, Mr.Six.
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A former member wrote:
*smiles* i told you, didn't i? i've missed your words, they're always so beautiful. don't ever tell me that you can't write :).
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On Sunday, March 26, 2006, mozarts cat
(184) wrote:
fantastic piece .. I see mirrors as being glass cages too ~V
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A former member wrote:
"trigger finger fantasies. and silver spoons." and "and we're all mind-gods. in disguise" and "illusion is a tool.
and the clocks tell lies in the form
of reflections. nostalgia" Jesus. That is all. ~Ryan
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On Saturday, March 25, 2006, Guillotine
(172) wrote:
does time exist? or is time merely a measure of evention created by a man-made concept of time?
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On Saturday, March 25, 2006, Guillotine
(172) wrote:
a great write though. memroies will cut us down.
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