.clocks-and-mirrors.

By Six-Out

clocks and mirrors.
they all tell
the same
lies.

if you ask me.


a dream of juxtaposed - almosts.
trigger finger fantasies. and silver spoons.
tossed aside. here.
and.
dressed to kill . culture shocker
with a mission to mask indecision.
there.

time is a god of the mind.
and we're all mind-gods. in disguise
minute hands like sandpaper .handshakes
the seconds speak volumes. if.
you're willing to listen.

the hours screaming bliss.
as the reflection relies on indifference.
glass cages- and ticking timebombs.
both can kill you. if.
you'll listen.


illusion is a tool.
and the clocks tell lies in the form
of reflections. nostalgia.
we're built on image- and distrust.
and the mirrors scream ::sleep.
they all tell.
the same.
lies.

if you ask me.

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© 2006 Six-Out
Published on Saturday, March 25, 2006.     Filed under: "Philosophical" and "Poetry"
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  • sIo On Thursday, December 1, 2011, sIo (898)By person wrote:

    I really like this. Something about it seems different than anything I've ever read of yours.

  • PoeticHellion On Monday, May 1, 2006, PoeticHellion (191)By person wrote:

    "dressed to kill . culture shocker with a mission to mask indecision" Mmm, this poem is so... true. I couldn't agree with you more. You are fabulous.

  • Spiritus_Frumenti On Friday, April 21, 2006, Spiritus_Frumenti (340)By person wrote:

    if you ask me, this is the kind of work that should mandatory in all schools and universities. wise and poignant. remarkable...-l-

  • A former member wrote: masterfully wrought.-silver

  • AniDayz On Wednesday, April 12, 2006, AniDayz (812)By person wrote:

    yessah.

  • antiScripsony On Thursday, April 6, 2006, antiScripsony (30)By person wrote:

    that was the best ending i've seen in a while.

  • Rachel On Friday, March 31, 2006, Rachel (210)By person wrote:

    I can't remember if I told you already or not, but I really love this. You'll never lose the ability to touch my soul...

  • Anoblechicken On Thursday, March 30, 2006, Anoblechicken (38)By person wrote:

    poo poo your beautiful

  • veingo On Tuesday, March 28, 2006, veingo (526)By person wrote:

    Damn! There is NO question, that you are very good, at what you do. ^V^

  • A former member wrote: deep... love the images: time and reflection seem to be inseperable. time... god of the mind, sounds reminiscent of Kant. the minute hands line/stanza is killer

  • Sin On Monday, March 27, 2006, Sin (1135)By person wrote:

    meh...so much for not being about to write pfftt!

  • Six-Out On Monday, March 27, 2006, Six-Out (1423)By person wrote:

    I can't. I stole this from the other Jon.

  • Sin On Monday, March 27, 2006, Sin (1135)By person wrote:

    liar!

  • A former member wrote: "dream of juxtaposed - almosts" - beautifully said. "the mirrors scream ::sleep" - Intriguing and insightful. This is terrific work, Mr.Six.

  • A former member wrote: *smiles* i told you, didn't i? i've missed your words, they're always so beautiful. don't ever tell me that you can't write :).

  • mozarts cat On Sunday, March 26, 2006, mozarts cat (183)By person wrote:

    fantastic piece .. I see mirrors as being glass cages too ~V

  • A former member wrote: "trigger finger fantasies. and silver spoons." and "and we're all mind-gods. in disguise" and "illusion is a tool. and the clocks tell lies in the form of reflections. nostalgia" Jesus. That is all. ~Ryan

  • Guillotine On Saturday, March 25, 2006, Guillotine (168)By person wrote:

    does time exist? or is time merely a measure of evention created by a man-made concept of time?

  • Guillotine On Saturday, March 25, 2006, Guillotine (168)By person wrote:

    a great write though. memroies will cut us down.


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